Starting from Zero in a Crossover World, I Get Picked Up by Saten

The first chapter of the author feels very popular. Although my CPU processor is a little unable to spin after reading it, it feels very popular inexplicably.

Chapter 1**, so verbose, even worse than a novice

Looks like he was picked up by the colonel

If you want to write about self-pleasure, just keep writing. You can write whatever you want, but don't think about the data.

The writing is so confusing that it makes people confused.

Come on, practice your writing.

There is a saying that the first chapter of Luo Liba has a long-winded beginning that I don't want to do, and then I jump to the next chapter and can't see it. It always feels like a lot is missing. If I don't change this kind of beginning, sooner or later GG

The first chapter can be said to be water, or it can be said to be the reason for going to another world. But after I read it, it made me think what kind of person the protagonist is. But I hope that the follow-up will not conflict with the character design of the first chapter.

People who read it were confused, and the power system revealed was not that good, it was not as good as the Demonic Forbidden City. It is estimated that more settings will be added later, **

To be honest, just because of your first chapter, I don't have the slightest desire to reward you with monthly tickets or flowers.