Short Video of the Ninja World: a Review of the Top Ten Illusions at the Beginning

Now there is no one I can read from Fei Lu, and the writing is getting worse and worse.

The Sandaime had the strength of a Chokage when he was at his peak. Among the Seventh Hokage, the second, third, fourth and sixth generations were all about the same strength as the Chokage. The fifth generation of Tsunade was weaker than the Chokage.

How many pictures have I written about Burmese Monkey?

Does junior schoolmate Yu Qi have a father? ? ? ? ? You are really writing nonsense. Mrs. Yuqi is so good.

This is spreading rumors and slandering New China. Is the author a spy?

I just watched the beginning of "The Longevity Pill" and I didn't want to watch it anymore. If you have to consider the man who abandons his wife and children as his father, you are still a time traveler. Even if you have difficulties, he is not your relative.

By the way, the strongest genjutsu is not Sakura's master. Do I feel like I have caught up with them?

This book is really good. The main character is a scumbag and has the intelligence to win over the heroine. He is rich and powerful.

Are you too thoughtful? The character setting is just like this...

Holy shit, the character is broken. Lin's character collapsed. Lin is not that kind of person at all.

It's really awesome to use things from the original characters to reward people and do it forcefully.

Are you sure you are writing about Naruto? The plot is a mess and the characters are poorly written, so why write about Naruto?

I feel like I'm not even as good as an ordinary person, who can hit 500 kilograms of force! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Authors should respect the original work when writing fan fiction.

How could Kakashi be stronger than the first Hokage? Author, are you mistaken?

What kind of bear do you want to write between Obito and Lin?

What's the meaning? My second generation Tobirama doesn't deserve to have a name? Not worthy of ranking? I really laughed

The rewards cannot be real. He simply collects over 10,000 yuan. He directly collects it from other people's possessions. For example, if you have a kaleidoscope, he will directly poke your eyes out and give chakra to the award-winning human-tailed beast. He will absorb it directly. Anyway, it is a system that collects over 10,000 yuan. This is the poorest system I have ever seen. I thought it was something. I might as well never give a reward. If I give a reward, it is so shabby. I don't know what to do.

Naruto is not as strong as Hashirama, and Kakashi is stronger than Hashirama.

Is this Voldemort's timeline?

Like the title, the author added it. (Added to the top)

After thinking about it, I haven't found out what's so great about Tsunade. She opened a hundred and then did a righteous five-on-one and she was almost stabbed to death. If she hadn't been a medical ninja, it would have been nothing. Then she broke the Susanoo and ended up like this. Didn't you see that Tsunade was almost stabbed to death? After the beating, if Orochimaru and the others hadn't come, she would have been killed. Why don't you just watch Danzo blow through Sasuke's incomplete Susanoo in one breath, and then blow Tsunade hard? Why isn't the Third Generation more awesome than Tsunade? Can Tsunade fight three Kages at once? Can you still take away three?

Why can't I see Hou Tu's compassion?

Almost every picture has to emphasize the old Xie family, and also mention the richest man in Ivory Mountain. This fucking scene is better than the protagonist.

It feels good so far, but there are a few problems. The chapter just said that if the protagonist has the golden fruit and becomes the bloodline of the origin, he should not be considered a human being, but a higher-level existence god or something. You have to set this yourself, and the data is too weak. Ordinary humans are 10. The protagonist eats the golden fruit. Is it three times that of an ordinary person? Where is the Daughter of Origin? I hope the author will not forget that the man of Origin cannot live without the Daughter of Origin. Can the protagonist become a basic King of Time? The latest King of Time meets the demon form is still very strong. In terms of setting, it is the King of Time in the form of the strongest king. I hope the author can write about it.

As for the author, do you want to write Date A Live? Please write it. Oh, forget it. I have to explain that my language is not good. I hope you, the author, can write Date A Live. If you write Date A Live, please don't forget those game elves, Sonogami Rinni, please. Hope you can write**

Author, could you be more serious when writing the levels? Since the first grade is the lowest, the ninth grade is the highest. When you were in Chapter 27, the commander of the Jinyiwei was actually a first-level cultivation level.

It's too random to dispatch special forces without even dispatching SWAT commandos. It's obviously a two-department system. Local governments have no right to mobilize special forces.

It turned out to be Zhao Kuo. I used to think that he was talking about war on paper. Later, after understanding the situation at that time, I found out that the Qin State secretly changed people. Just when he wanted to make a name for himself, he was killed by Bai Qi. However, judging from the battle damage ratio, he is not an easy person to compete with.

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