Earthly Traveler

Guys, I'm a newbie and I don't know what I should write. I wrote this novel based on the plot of the novel I usually like to read, plus some of my ideas. If there is anything wrong with the writing, please give me some advice! I will fill in my contact information in the work. If you have any advice, please let me know! Thousands of reincarnations, the road to unity for all eternity, just for that moment of reunion. This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.