A Ride on Horseback

Stop pretending, everyone, come and have some fun

Time flies by like a fleeting moment. If you don't pay attention, the little thief who stole things has become the immortal king who dominates the fairy world. It turns out that time can change so much. What remains unchanged is the original intention of you and me. It's a very good book. The author's writing style is mature enough and the plot is also unconventional. I was so shocked after reading it that I was immersed in that emotion and couldn't let it go for a long time.

The first chapter has been re-uploaded based on readers' opinions. The old chapters will be deleted later.

Well written, keep it up, I haven't seen something I like so much in a long time

Second: There is no title at the beginning. The first three chapters at the beginning are so confusing that people don't know what subject you are writing about. This is a big flaw. This is Feilu, which is famous for its refreshing writing. It does not let readers know what you are writing at the beginning, and readers do not have the patience to read on. And to be honest, from the first few chapters, I can't see anything refreshing at all.

Generally speaking, the writing style is acceptable, but it is very immature. If I guessed correctly, he must be a newcomer! Talk about flaws! First: The format of the article is not good, and the text is too compact, which will make readers very tired. This is an online novel, not a literary appreciation. Readers are here to relax. If they are tired, they will definitely not read it.

Holy shit! Thanks for having a hundred fans! Stay up late tonight and update two more chapters!

Are you sure you didn't run in after seeing the cover?

It took a long time to revise and revise, but I still wrote the monk to death.

The chapter 7 that was uploaded earlier *friends had some illegal words and there were some foreshadowings in the back that I didn't make good, so I re-uploaded them. Thank you for your support.