National Destiny: Playing as Ou Ran, Teammate Fire Miko

If you don't see it, the dent will be 18cm

The strength system collapsed, and I laughed. The pig's feet have evolved to the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, and they can activate Susana. They have achieved world-class strength. However, it turns out that it is as difficult to beat a national-level Atobu who has not evolved as it is to beat your father. How funny is that? Conceive the strength system first and then write about Net King, otherwise your next book will still collapse.

In the later stage, everyone is better than the protagonist?

Is this Bi Wang more like a funny beast than Bi Wang? In fact, the more I look at it, the more embarrassed I feel. There is no trace of Aizen at all.

It can't be like this. It's too cheap for that star. Ten thousand yuan has allowed her to make so much profit. It can't be like this.

I wouldn't be able to write something like this without a cerebral thrombosis in ten years.

Blindly guessing about the ultimate battle device, it will definitely not come out until it is on the shelves.

The only novel with more narration than the main character, wasting such a good subject matter like Aizen

If we only write about Aizen's golden words and strength, to be honest, there is not much to see. The author may have forgotten that Aizen's strategies are also very bad. This character will be very difficult to write, and the character design will probably collapse.

There are too many barrage and commentary room dramas, why is it still the same old routine? Do you all use the same template to write novels?

Are you copying directly from other books? How can a charming host stay here forever? Is it all sand? Use your own brain and don't copy everything.

There are very few people who write about the cup of tea. Don't be a eunuch in that book.

Regarding this time, it is "National Destiny: Playing as King Ran, Teammate of the Fire Miko" written by Wu Shen. Chapter 6: This is... King Gu! Disaster in the White Elephant Kingdom! Please collectChapter review.

It was re-released, and it's just a hodgepodge, and there's also a story about ghosts blowing out lanterns. The timeline is wrong. It's better to travel to the world of tomb robbers next. I added this in the rewrite. The timeline is too messy, and it's just a hodgepodge. It was ** year when Hu Bayi came back to see Fatty Wang, and it was about ** year when he left the Yumen in the West. You might as well write notes on tomb robbers. Notes on tomb robbers are about the same time. Add in the ghost blowing out lanterns. The timeline is not right at all. It looks awkward.

About "Old Wilderness: Traveling Frog, Bringing Back the Mythical Method at the Beginning" written by King Journey to the West 30: With a strike from the saint, the Nine-Meandering Yellow River Formation was broken! Chapter review.

So, you disbanded the ** and Sayazi ran away?