
Hell Open Beta: My Shadow Disappeared Again
地狱公测:我的影子又双叒不见了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 218k Words
- Subgenre
- Horror Thriller
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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94Chapters
1.4MReads
4.5kFlowers
10.0Score
300Rewards
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Regarding "Hell Public Beta: My Shadow Disappears Again" written by Feng Yuyelai, Chapter 7: Flesh and flesh are weak and weak, but machines ascend? Chapter review.
Hurry up, hurry up, hurry up, update quickly.
This book is quite good, but the protagonist seems to be unparalleled throughout the whole story, and the role of the shadow is downplayed a lot. There should be some life-and-death crisis for the protagonist to inspire blood, and the shadow should also play a role, which fits the title. The ghosts written in the first part, and the seam monsters in the later part are a bit more Cthulhu style. It is best to determine a systematic style, otherwise it will be easy to write messy words in the later period if the writing is not strong enough.
Commentary on Chapter 22: Trip to the Police Station written by Feng Yuyelai in "Hell Public Beta: My Shadow Disappears Again".
The plot is a bit delayed. The author can reduce the number of live broadcast barrages and use the saved words to promote the plot.
About the book "Da Ming: Being imitated by Zhu Di, I can't stand it any longer" about the sleepwalking live broadcast. Chapter 29: Son, how can the Ming Dynasty become economically strong? Chapter review.