National Fate: The Heavenly Demon Zither and Three Peerless Immortal Maidens as Teammates

Mengxin writes a book for the first time, "Three Wonders Fairy" Mengmeng, does anyone read it?

The current image of the protagonist created by the author always emphasizes the devil, has a loser mentality, likes to show off, always laughs like crazy, and always looks like a madman when he gives off his momentum. To be honest, he looks like a clown in the middle. I don't like this character design. The protagonist should be made into a fairy and a devil. He usually behaves like an immortal in his words, deeds, and life attitude, and acts like a wild, thundering, domineering and unrestrained person. Such opposite and contradictory sides appear in a person, full of boundless charm, and are poison to women. They love them beyond hope, and then they give up.

Personally, I think it would be better if there were less barrage analysis, rainbow farts and surprises.

The palace, the devils, fight to the death, understand?

For example, Fuxi Shen Tianxiang in the Pili puppet show and so on

At least ten updates a day (??.??)

Why is there so little Fuxi Shen Tianxiang?

The character selection is good, but it's too cliché, and it feels too artificial. If you reduce it appropriately, it will be much better. If you don't reduce it, it feels like you won't be able to finish the day after it's been on the shelves, and you won't even be able to walk through the next scene.

If you notice, when the protagonist snaps his fingers, he doesn't mention running the Tianlong Bayin once, and he doesn't even mention playing the flute. Qu Mengmeng's answer was just a joke. She only mentioned Tianlong Bayin when she knocked on the handle of the knife, which means that the previous ones were just about the protagonist's strong sonic control ability. . .

It would be nice to update more