Everyone Gets a Treasure Chest: Everything I Get Is S-Rank

Or maybe it's an introduction question, maybe it's too cliche and I don't have the desire to click on it.

Also, you should write some of your own characteristics to make the protagonist have his own characteristics. It is best not to overpower the protagonist. If you don't overpower the protagonist, then write a more grand world view. For example, like Pei Tu*'s Zhutian Projection, at the beginning, although he wrote a very common Zhutian style, he had a unique and grand world view.

It feels like you overwhelmed the protagonist in Chapter 11. Shouldn't that fireball be shot past as soon as it condenses on the protagonist? Why do you still have to dodge? If you want to dodge, it should be changed to instant.

As for the dialogue in Chapter 11, I don't know where to complain. It's a bit cliche.

I remember that there should be a title effect that increases the level of the treasure chest, right?

What are you thinking about? There is no desire for others to read these chapters.

I think there may be more people in Chapter 20 or 30. I discovered this book from the latest