People in Knights: I Am the One Who Manages Ordinary Times

Sanqing is divided into three parts by Pangu Yuanshen. If it is fused, wouldn't it directly become Pangu Yuanshen? Can the avenue accommodate pig's feet?

Go to hell with the author, Lin and Tuzi are a couple

After reading a few chapters, I felt that the protagonist was a bit vulgar, and a gentle beast like me couldn't relate to it. I read several books in this category in succession, and I felt a little tired.

I don't want to know more about your surname. Doesn't it have to be Li? Same-sex marriage was not allowed in the Tang Dynasty! Li's surname is still Guo's surname! ! Write after you understand it

Anyone? If there is any, let's give it a shout!

As in the title, there are too many "ah" characters, which makes it look too awkwardbr

Now I am particularly curious about how I wrote about Holy Blade. After all, I used the power of books. Is this world of Holy Blade created by the protagonist?

An ordinary period will do. What you know is their conversation, but what you don't know is that they are arguing. Flexible use of punctuation marks will directly improve the perception.

I feel like the protagonist doesn't have as many roles as the others.

It's not that you can't watch love, or harems, or it's a little more reasonable. Let's just say this paragraph with Yue, and he can't get angry at anything. It's obviously his favorite octopus ball, and he uses his own psychological medicine ability to analyze it. He denies that this is impossible, but why so fast? It's really fast! Everything? How about we stop doing this kind of setting? I can accept your invincible text beating me back and forth. I can accept any number of self-published tasks and a bunch of rewards. What the hell are you doing? Is this love?

There is a place in Chapter 4 where the protagonist's name is written as Eternal

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The author should weaken the description of the thunder tribulation of metamorphosis. After all, it is just becoming an immortal. Your description like that is a bit too much.

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I didn't read a word of it! Just saw your title! A smile brings many fruits? ? ? Author, you should have watched One Piece! And you should like it very much, otherwise you wouldn't have opened the book! Either don't write, don't say how good it is, but please write seriously!

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You can't practice well in chaos first before traveling through all realms.

The relationship between the characters in the duel is a bit messy, and there is no layout. For example, in the chapter of Stardust VS Black Rose Dragon, the two of them didn't know each other in that duel. Yusei was trying to save Izayoi, who was very rebellious at that time, and his psychological activities were too messy. This is a problem that many chapters have. I hope the author can work hard and write better and better. There are very few books of this type. Come on.

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