National Destiny Lord: My Troops Can Evolve

How can a normal person be moved so many times in a constant cycle of being excited? The constant cycle of routine makes you excited at every turn. This is because your body is filled with hormones and you can just be excited.

It's okay for a no-brainer, but it's too unfriendly for those who look closely. I hope the author can see it and make some changes in the future.

The book is a good book, but the audience outside each chapter accounts for too much. Although I am very clueless when reading books, I was speechless when I saw that 70 to 80% of each chapter was off-site dialogue.

Advancement is not the same as the advancement of all soldiers. It requires one person to advance. Does this require an elite route? Summon one for each unit?

Set up a stronghold and charge in??? The stronghold is so big, how can the cavalry charge? At least let's try another way.

This lead role has a lot of scenes, it's really embarrassing, watching

. . . You, it takes a long time to upgrade one by one, not the template upgrade

The rest of the writing is great, but it's so embarrassing for the viewers of this live broadcast.

There are 100 people entering from each country. Why is it written as if only the protagonist enters?

Don't be sudden and sensational, it's embarrassing, okay? You can have sensationalism, but don't be abrupt and have a good sense of proportion.