Elf Scratch-Off System

This ending is so fucked up. Everything else is pretty good, but this ending is so f*cked up that it makes me vomit.

Anderson's Fairy Tales The little girl selling arms... "R. P. G, R. P. G, the latest R. P. G. Sir, please buy one!" The little girl's bare feet were turned purple from the cold, but she had not eaten for a whole day. If she could not sell another weapon, she would starve to death. Men rushing home to celebrate the New Year smiled and shook their heads because these "toys" were too expensive. The little girl huddled in the corner, thinking of her grandmother. She took out an A. K. M., Ejected the bullet, took it apart and ignited the gunpowder, which would keep her warm. The little girl took out a red button from the pocket of her ragged dress and remembered what her grandma had said. This button would bring people happiness. She pressed it without hesitation, and a huge mushroom bloomed on the ground. On this day, countless people saw their grandma

Wouldn't it be better if the initial elf were a curl-eared rabbit? Good looks and ethnicity

The more I read, the more I felt that this book was a pretentious and slap-in-the-face urban novel in elf skin. The protagonist was constantly being provoked and then slapped in the face. . . . . . . , Can't it be more harmonious?

What the hell is 98 and 97 not connected at all? I can't find anything that can be connected to the back. How do you look at this thing? I see*ma

There were three chapters a day before, but two chapters a day after I urged you to update? ? ?

When I see the protagonist using an Apple phone, I immediately stop watching it.

Did you eat up the number of words that Big Brother urged you to update?

It's considered a normal elf fanfic in Feilu. The content is very good. I saw about two hundred chapters, and the content is just about three elves. There are so many supporting characters that I can't even remember the name of the heroine.

The strength of this elf is that of a master. Even if there is, the master level is actually not as good as the gym level. This is like a master in an industry who is not as good as a teacher.

Brother, what you write is an elf novel. Can it be more pure, with less brainless villains, less pretentious and slap-in-the-face, or more natural in the face-slap?

I can understand why the Martial Arts Rabbit is tied with other people's elves, but if Metagross, the peak king, competes in this school and there are elves that can tie with it, then I can't understand it. I hope that everything will be crushed later.

For me, seeing Gardevoir is like seeing the Mona Lisa. .

About half of the chapters of the Elf novel have nothing to do with the Elf. The pace is too slow, and judging from the current situation, the combat power collapses too easily.

Write less emotional scenes, there are too many

There were a lot of updates before and it looked pretty good, but now there are a little less updates.

Come on, come on~ I want to see Chen Yifan slapped in the face! ! (Referring to the competition, not that)

Oh my god, what did I see, updated? There has been no update for several months. I thought the author had gotten involved.

When can the protagonist have a fight with someone from Teito University?

Bronze rewards qualification improvement, gold rewards a skill disc? Is your level reasonable?

If a minor is not accompanied by a guardian, the contract signed will be invalid, right?

Let's not talk about anything else. You don't even know the reason why Tang Sect never uses poison. If you write it randomly, you are not a true fan. Since you plan to write about Heavenly Sword, you should check the information carefully.

Weakness: Sumi just shoots Sumi, or do you know how to play? You can't think of this trick even if you're brain-drained.

Fei Lu Tianxia, ​​your fart, I want to scold you when I see these two words.

About Chapter 16 of "The Last Valkyrie: The Killing God Bai Qi, Trapping the God of Thunder" written by Bing Bai, who is dressed as a woman! Simulated ocean battlefield! [Ask for flower monthly ticket] Chapter review.