My Right Eye Has Mutated

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"Xiao Er, have a cup of loneliness." "I'm sorry! Sir, our store is empty." "Then have a drink and be happy." "I'm sorry! Sir, it's sold out. How about I give you a cup of Loneliness that you usually drink?" "No, I've been drinking that stuff for five years, and I want to change the taste today. Isn't there any happiness in it?" "Yes, it's just a parallel import." "Do you really mean that?" "Yesterday, there was a man who bought fake things, so I bought one and got one free for him. As you know, these days it's really worthless, so I have no choice but to use it as a gift. "Forget it, let's have some true love. " "Sir, please don't embarrass me. You also know that there is no such thing on the market. It has been out of stock for many years. However, I heard that this thing has appeared on the black market and the price is very high. "... I haven't drank that stuff in years, and I've forgotten what it tastes like." "Sir, I advise you not to drink that stuff. It tastes good, but it can easily leave side effects." "How do you know? Have you drunk it?" "I would rather drink Sanlu than drink that thing. I just listened to what other guests said. Guest, if that doesn't work, you can have a cup of Qingqing. This one is selling well recently and many guests like to drink it.' "Haha! Really? Didn't they like to drink wolf heart and dog lung a while ago? Why did they change the taste again? " "This has become popular in the market recently. " "Oh! Forget it, I don't like that. Do you have a lover?" "Yes. " "Come on, give me more promises. "Now the promises are all false. " "Then how do you sell a confidant?" "This is precious, one is destined to receive it." "Come on, oh! By the way, here's some love, pack it up and take it home to feed the pigs.

I haven't watched it yet but I dare give it 100 points! Picture 1: My friend wants QQ and WeChat!

I just couldn't watch Chapter 100 and came here to express my opinion (don't comment if you don't like it! Let's highlight the point!!), Isn't it about the invasion of all realms? Why is there so much internal fighting that the enemy has nothing to do, and he is consumed internally first? Then I feel that there is no one in the base that can be put on the table. It gives me the feeling that these bases have just been established, with no background or anything. The one called Ha Yi and the other one. Once something goes wrong, the higher ups will destroy the Ling Base. The article said that other bases are weaker. I can't imagine how the higher ups managed to create these schools. There are almost no seeds that can rise in the country? Or should we say that these three bases are simply dispensable?

Killing can't solve the problem, but it can solve all the troublemakers!

The author should have read some official articles and some other passionate articles. The basics of Chinese language are also good. The writing is rather attractive. I am not a professional, so I will tell you my thoughts on this novel (although I don't know why I wrote it): First: This book is about a world of complete darkness. There may be a glimmer of starlight, but it will be extinguished quickly. Second: The leadership structure of this world should be such that those at the top are the strongest! Only fists are the last word. In the middle level, there are a few strong ones (mostly vassals of the upper level) and most of the cliquey families, sects, etc. (With fists and connections). The lower level consists of some small households with no big connections and limitless connections, as well as some upper-level forces or middle-level forces that have fallen away (generally they have a lot of background and may rise, while those without any background will be completely destroyed). According to judgment, this composition is no more than a few hundred years old! Even decades! Because first: the upper management has no long-term vision. For the protagonist, who is a genius who is rare to see in a thousand years, the monsters will not protect him (the reason is that the fist is big, so a sixth level is more important than dozens or hundreds of fifth levels). There will definitely be gaps in the follow-up, and the personal guards will just give it to some people who play with power! Tsk tsk. Second: After the conqueror dies, leave and have some tea! ! ! Tsk tsk tsk! 5,000 Years of civilization! Fake it! As long as something like this appears, whether you are the beneficiary or the beneficiary, people's hearts will be scattered. This will cause the upper level to start preparing for backup from the time when the first column occurs (for example: definitely not go if you encounter a certain death situation) The guarding parties mainly focus on interests, and will only consider sacrifice if they have successors or if the family (sect) can develop well without being targeted (without being targeted) (in feudal times, nobles will always be nobles, and civilians will always be civilians, unless you grab the nobles). Some are quite soldiers, and some are quite bosses. Even if they can practice, not all of them can be strong enough to defeat everything. And I don't see anyone not eating! I speculate that if everyone practices, the probability of no one cooking is 0%. Even if everyone does not need to eat, it is just like everyone can live without playing games, not listening to music, not watching TV, just eating and sleeping every day (someone said: eating is to live, but living is not just to eat), so there is a brain disease. This is the first time I write such a long comment. Although there is more to write, . . Too lazy to write

Those who are not Taoists with advanced cultivation should not read this book.

The author, the book is a good book, the plot and writing are good, really. However, the plot is still a bit crude, because the protagonist can make a comeback every time, which kind of reveals that the protagonist is a protagonist, not a book, and it is easy to cause drama occasionally. But it was very good and looked like a good book. I remember I had read a book and it was very good. It was really good. It gave me the feeling that I couldn't find anything wrong with it. But I still gave up, mainly because it was so good! It feels very dreamy

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I'm trying to persuade you to quit. This book is extremely depressing. The protagonist is tortured in various ways and the world view is dark. Normal people should not read it. After all, you will definitely be addicted to it after reading it. Then you will scold the author and get angry for the effort.