The First Ability User
About This Novel
After being trapped as a Jedi in space for three months, Chen Mu returned and discovered that the outside world had already been 20 years later, and the wars with foreign races had become history. In this era, he is the only survivor with the strongest first-generation talent. The prophecy that was interrupted back then has gradually come true 20 years later.
What Readers Think
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Stop writing about games all the time, okay?
Stop writing about games. What a wretched development
Five stars come on
The writing is okay, the writing style is also okay, but the writing is a bit rushed. I haven't digested this part yet, and I'm halfway through the next part. The pace is too fast, and the writing is very boring. You can try to write slower, have more details, and improve the number of words. Author, if you write in such a hurry, I'm afraid you will finish it in less than a few hundred chapters.
I almost threw up, really.
I still use the same old routine of slapping equipment in the face from 10 years ago, and I don't need to look at it. I know half of the next plot. If I can only give you one star, I won't give you a fucking point. It's already 0202, and there is still this routine, start with a beautiful girl, enter the school, slap in the face to pretend to be cool, admire the younger students, recruit the beautiful girl, meet the beautiful instructor, a certain beauty is the daughter of a certain family, and continue to slap in the face, Mader. So disgusting (; 一_一) Damn it, you messed with Mark.
Why are there all games in the back?
Games account for too much, so why not change the name? Game streaming?
Commentary
After reading a few pictures, I still couldn't get to the point, the chapters were a bit dragged out, and the writing was a bit stiff. The subject matter is good, but when you meet a woman, you can guess the plot behind it. There are still twenty years left, so the top priority is not to find people or clues. But go directly to the school, pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, and have written instructions to persuade you to quit.
Let me liven up the atmosphere, shout after me, author in women's clothing, author in women's clothing, author in women's clothing
Morning, morning, looking at women's clothing, my life span is longer (liao) The author's women's clothing, the author's women's clothing, the author's women's clothing, the author's women's clothing
I am currently following two books written by the author. I want to update them, but I am afraid that the update of the other one will be slow.
What a pity
The subject matter is really good. It's a pity that the writing is not good, and the routine is too,,, old. What can I say? A good hand of cards is played badly. I've just missed this book and am looking forward to your next book.
. . .
Yin Ning and the female star felt uncomfortable watching it for some reason. I hope the author can change it in the following chapters.
Couldn't help it anymore. Don't take advantage of the sci-fi supernatural genre! Let's write game flow instead
I can't stand it anymore. Not many chapters were written about the actual battle. Write more game combat chapters. Hahaha
Rating
Community(0)
Official(50)
Stop writing about games all the time, okay?
Stop writing about games. What a wretched development
Five stars come on
The writing is okay, the writing style is also okay, but the writing is a bit rushed. I haven't digested this part yet, and I'm halfway through the next part. The pace is too fast, and the writing is very boring. You can try to write slower, have more details, and improve the number of words. Author, if you write in such a hurry, I'm afraid you will finish it in less than a few hundred chapters.
I almost threw up, really.
I still use the same old routine of slapping equipment in the face from 10 years ago, and I don't need to look at it. I know half of the next plot. If I can only give you one star, I won't give you a fucking point. It's already 0202, and there is still this routine, start with a beautiful girl, enter the school, slap in the face to pretend to be cool, admire the younger students, recruit the beautiful girl, meet the beautiful instructor, a certain beauty is the daughter of a certain family, and continue to slap in the face, Mader. So disgusting (; 一_一) Damn it, you messed with Mark.
Why are there all games in the back?
Games account for too much, so why not change the name? Game streaming?
Commentary
After reading a few pictures, I still couldn't get to the point, the chapters were a bit dragged out, and the writing was a bit stiff. The subject matter is good, but when you meet a woman, you can guess the plot behind it. There are still twenty years left, so the top priority is not to find people or clues. But go directly to the school, pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, and have written instructions to persuade you to quit.
Let me liven up the atmosphere, shout after me, author in women's clothing, author in women's clothing, author in women's clothing
Morning, morning, looking at women's clothing, my life span is longer (liao) The author's women's clothing, the author's women's clothing, the author's women's clothing, the author's women's clothing
I am currently following two books written by the author. I want to update them, but I am afraid that the update of the other one will be slow.
What a pity
The subject matter is really good. It's a pity that the writing is not good, and the routine is too,,, old. What can I say? A good hand of cards is played badly. I've just missed this book and am looking forward to your next book.
. . .
Yin Ning and the female star felt uncomfortable watching it for some reason. I hope the author can change it in the following chapters.
Couldn't help it anymore. Don't take advantage of the sci-fi supernatural genre! Let's write game flow instead
I can't stand it anymore. Not many chapters were written about the actual battle. Write more game combat chapters. Hahaha
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