How Rich is It?

I just read the first few chapters, I'm a little surprised but I understand a little bit I just slept with another girl, and the next morning I found a girlfriend. This may mean that we can share hardships but not wealth. I think the writing is very true. But he is the protagonist after all, so he should change it later.

I read the first few chapters of this book, but I couldn't stand it. Then I looked at the table of contents. Sure enough, my expectations were too high when I read the introduction. After reading all the way, it may be that the author's skills are not good enough. It is too white. The plot develops too fast and seems to have no feeling. But I still hope that the author can stick to it. If this novel was still very good when I first came into contact with novels three years ago, but it may be that I have read too many novels in the past few years and some newbies can't stand it. Come on, author.

Forget about this book. Reopen a book. Write slower. Writing style. Very good.

It is recommended not to write a long paragraph of text together. It will make you upset and cause visual fatigue. It will look very tiring.

It's not great, but it's okay. It needs to be clearly prioritized, and there are some typos.

This guy is so awesome

But the main structure is not clear. The segments are too confusing. The pace is too fast. Then the author must have only been writing for himself at that time and did not care about the people who read the novel. There isn't even a hint of humor.