Doomsday: Building a Floating City from a Hostel

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The more I get to the end, the more speechless I become. I just kill all the people I meet except for taking girls. I basically repeat this routine. It can be seen that the author has no money and can only continue writing like this.

To be honest, if there are too many mutants, the zombies at the end of the world will no longer be important and have become marginalized in the background. , There is no need for too many superpowers, so you won't be able to experience the feeling of doomsday zombies at all. Also, don't have too many women, that's enough. If there are too many, you won't be able to control them at all, and your writing skills are not strong enough.

It's an okay and enjoyable story, but some of the bad points are set at the beginning and are almost impossible to change, such as the golden finger that opens the harem and gains special powers. Having such a golden finger means that the harem must be opened in a big way. As a result, the author started to open up the harem seriously and then there were basically no women to accept. Is it possible that beauties are only found in medical schools and not elsewhere? I hope the author will think carefully about the next book and what Goldfinger is writing.

A new book for a newcomer, a cool article about the invincibility of the doomsday, I beg you all for your support! (Updated on time at 0:00 every day, the complete version of the chapter enters the dark room from time to time, please watch it in time. If you encounter too many omitted details, it means that you are driving too fast and have been deleted!)

Some opinions about the book: The following are all personal subjective opinions. If you have different opinions, please feel free to discuss them. 1. This is a relatively pure and refreshing book, suitable for killing time on the subway or bus. It does not have some disgusting and brainless plots, but occasionally there are some contradictions in the context and context. For example, in the first few chapters, the drone flies in the air and is not attacked by zombie birds. It would be better to add some supplementary settings to improve it. 2. I feel that the author needs to use other methods to mobilize emotions. Too many vernacular sentences to describe other people's reactions to reflect the intensity of the protagonist may cause aesthetic fatigue in the later period. You can learn from some previous books. Most of them are presented in the form of environment (main character) + human reaction (moderate addition). For example, in the section describing the protagonist's ability to clear the scene with ice, the author wrote something like this or a few words like "With one blow, the huge group of corpses suddenly became completely blank. The surrounding zombies felt the fatal threat and stood still and did not dare to move." In addition, there were a large number of individual reactions, such as swallowing saliva, saying words of shock, trembling legs, or psychologically asking "Is this really an enemy that they xxxx can't defeat yet?" To be honest, people who read this kind of repetitive writing will start to feel bored. Without reading, I can know roughly what the protagonist will write next after showing off, which will lead to a decrease in sensory pleasure. I wrote a short paragraph myself, "The terrifying ice blade that kept spinning suddenly burst out, and the huge force caused the hard blade to penetrate deeply into the ground. The life in the frost field was stripped away inch by inch, and the ejected ice slag fell to the ground and even made a thin layer of ice. With one blow, deathly silence enveloped the battlefield, and a sense of fear climbed onto the backs of the zombies. They were usually known as the living dead, and like humans, they began to fear the aura of death that lay before them, and did not dare to act rashly. The scene in front of them was too shocking. Everyone's thoughts had not yet recovered from the destructive force. The light and sound seemed to have been greatly erased. The only thing people could hear seemed to be their own breathing that was getting thicker from time to time. " Personally, I think that using the scope and environment as the main description may be more realistic, more durable, and provide a better reading experience. Then add one or two sentences to describe the individual words and behavioral responses, so that the description is in place and not too procrastinating. The main reason is that the author's description of the individual's words and behaviors is a bit redundant. 3. The combination of science fiction ideas and the apocalyptic environment is very good. The proposal of some science fiction equipment can not only develop the territory but also promote the smooth emergence of new crisis plots. It is a good setting to kill two birds with one stone.

I only have one idea, use tape to tape the pig's feet and eyebrows!

I just looked at a few pictures, but I don't understand. Can someone please explain?

It's boring. I thought that only the main character had powers, but after a while everyone had them.

If the cover is well received, please hand over the author's cover, otherwise I will change it to one star.