Chaos Ancestral Dragon God
by Mu Dao
About This Novel
When heaven and earth first opened, I was born between heaven and earth. I am the only one who is immortal and immortal. I became the Chaos Dragon God and defeated all the heroes.
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Official(2)Scraped 11d ago
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The paragraphs are not clear, and the punctuation marks are not marked. But if a newcomer can say this, the writing style is not bad, but some descriptions are really not good. It is strongly recommended to make a major change, and then it is best to make three chapters into one. The weight of one chapter is too small.
Overall, the idea is good, but there are still some flaws in some places.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 11d ago
tell the truth
The paragraphs are not clear, and the punctuation marks are not marked. But if a newcomer can say this, the writing style is not bad, but some descriptions are really not good. It is strongly recommended to make a major change, and then it is best to make three chapters into one. The weight of one chapter is too small.
Overall, the idea is good, but there are still some flaws in some places.
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