Advanced Players in Arc

Because all the money I had was used to raise cats, I only had 30 yuan left. 1 Book coin on the first floor, capped at 3,000. Reward once for every thousand floors. Finally, come on, author.

Great idea, but are you procrastinating too much? Don't you realize your biggest problem? When you write a novel, you write the main character 24 hours a day, except for the fart, which is a separate chapter... You can write tens of thousands of words about thunder and lightning, describe muscles, lines, blood and heartbeats when running in the morning, bring breakfast to classmates and boring conversations after returning home, you can write thousands of words, you can introduce two chapters to the school, you can chat with passerby A for a few hundred words when you go to the company, and then passerby B jumps out and writes a few hundred words, and passerby C... Selling a model can write thousands of words of mindless dialogue...

I just read more than a dozen chapters, let me tell you my own feelings, please don't complain! 😪I feel like there are places in the chapter where Pigfoot talks to himself and then passes it off in one stroke. It's so dull. There are also many people who have middle school dreams or middle school syndrome, but don't bring it into Pigfoot's verbal expression and inner monologue, okay? It makes people feel that this pig's feet are stupid! Also, the pig's trotters mentioned in the article are not in the novel or they have read too many novels. This shows that the author clearly saw that the pig's trotters were not in the novel in his conception. Why did he always refer to the boss above him as the bureau chief and himself as the boss? He also emphasized it many times, which made me even more unable to take it into consideration. Then again, the subject matter is pretty good, but it's a bit verbose, and the character of the pig's trotters was not written well. Originally, the author, you are in the second grade, so your idea is to have a middle two plot, but can you not have the second grade pig's trotters in the plot, and the supporting characters also be in the second grade!

In the past, I read books based on the content, but now I read books based on the names. I really can't help choosing a good name. Even though the introduction wasn't good, I still read more than ten minutes of comments, saying that the writing was bad, long-winded, clumsy, and that the main character used bad words, but no one discussed what the main character did. Then I looked at the table of contents, what the hell? Take your time and see the return? The second world? Only then did I realize that it was a time-travel novel. This puts me at ease. In fact, I am talking so much just for the sake of water. That's right, in order to do the task.

I just read a dozen chapters, and the word "I rub" appeared at least a dozen times. The protagonist said it over and over again... Does the author think it's cool to be bold... I just think the writing is very white and looks very diaosi.

It's very beautiful and well written. Except that I am particularly disgusted with the appearance of real people's names in novels, other contents are fine. And I'm also curious, don't you feel embarrassed when you see the pronouns or names of certain people in real life appearing in novels? I took a look at the n-dimensional category of female videos before out of curiosity. I wanted to see what kind of books the n-dimensional category was, but it turned out to be extremely awkward. (I have no objections to this type of book, nor do I have any objections to readers who read this type of book. This is just my personal opinion.)

I can't stand it after reading Chapter 14, the word count is so good! What about water? Keep introducing everything. It takes hundreds of words to introduce something that is completely unnecessary! Just like the power armor in Chapter 14, the author wishes he could introduce a screw for hundreds of words. Also, almost all the dialogues are like the Tang Monk in Journey to the West, sputtering hundreds of words! Awesome, my water god!

The writing is so bad that I can't stand it anymore.

It's okay to give technology to the country. Your sister has even handed over heavy high-tech weapons such as tanks, fighter jets, and aircraft carriers to the country. Do you think your life will be shortened? Doesn't the country investigate his origin? If you bring it back directly, you're afraid the country will think someone else is intruding.

I looked at 30 of them and they were all nonsense. I was speechless and gave up.