
Mobile Vertical and Horizontal
by Lost Shadow
About This Novel
He grew up in a cruel environment, adhered to his unchanging creed, shouldered the mission of the military soul, and embarked on the battlefield of redemption. Readers and friends are welcome to read the new book "Secret Yi Xian"
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Official(14)Scraped 17d ago
Long suite building
Friends are welcome to participate
The subject matter is good, but the narrative method is problematic
Don't describe too much about the psychological state, especially for non-protagonists. For example, when the protagonist is fighting online, he describes the psychological thoughts of many female anchors and the situations of other people. This is completely unnecessary and will make the original fight less exciting.
I opened it on my phone and saw how deserted it was.
I opened it on my phone and saw how deserted it was.
When I first started reading the first chapter, I always felt it was a bit like the Skull and Bones trilogy, so I was quite interested.
Many of the aircraft combat genres are my favorite types.
Why do you have so many foreign names?
I hope the author will inject more Chinese cultural elements into the interstellar era. Chinese culture is the best hope for mankind.
Come on, keep an eye on you
Hail Mary
It's too Holy Mother. If you don't like Holy Mother, don't watch it. What a great Holy Mother. The brilliance of the protagonist really lights up the whole world. The murderer of his mentor was let go. Awesome.
Why is there no one?
Why is there no one reading such a good novel?
The prototype of Athena is Lacus, right?
Can Guoguo survive?
Rating
Community(0)
Official(14)Scraped 17d ago
Long suite building
Friends are welcome to participate
The subject matter is good, but the narrative method is problematic
Don't describe too much about the psychological state, especially for non-protagonists. For example, when the protagonist is fighting online, he describes the psychological thoughts of many female anchors and the situations of other people. This is completely unnecessary and will make the original fight less exciting.
I opened it on my phone and saw how deserted it was.
I opened it on my phone and saw how deserted it was.
When I first started reading the first chapter, I always felt it was a bit like the Skull and Bones trilogy, so I was quite interested.
Many of the aircraft combat genres are my favorite types.
Why do you have so many foreign names?
I hope the author will inject more Chinese cultural elements into the interstellar era. Chinese culture is the best hope for mankind.
Come on, keep an eye on you
Hail Mary
It's too Holy Mother. If you don't like Holy Mother, don't watch it. What a great Holy Mother. The brilliance of the protagonist really lights up the whole world. The murderer of his mentor was let go. Awesome.
Why is there no one?
Why is there no one reading such a good novel?
The prototype of Athena is Lacus, right?
Can Guoguo survive?









