Shelter: All-pro Survival

Too watery, not enough information to refer to the review. There are about 5 parts in each chapter. 1 Is content, and the rest is just water. 1. Repeat the full attribute skill inventory. 2. There is a huge amount of water forums, basically deleting them will not affect the plot. 3. Repeat mental activities, balance every little thing in your mind over and over again, and write a paragraph in whichever direction you go before going out. 4. Every time a new item appears, a long paragraph must be described in detail. Even tables and chairs must be described in a long paragraph of nonsense, let alone weapons. I really want to report all the detailed data. Finally, I want to say that there is a limit to the number of words you can tolerate, and you can't mess with it for free. There is actually no essential difference between watering a book and watering beef. I hope readers won't delete their comments.

I hope the author can be faster, come on, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The first one is your book. Is it because of big data?

You can first look at the previous part. There are too many, one to describe an exchange, and then there is no clear direction for the protagonist. Generally, he will set a small goal. The protagonist will set a plan, and then execute the protagonist according to this plan. It feels that everything comes directly by luck, and then everyone has luck. In this case, the protagonist will appear to be very dull, and it will appear that other people are mentally retarded, rather than reflecting the protagonist's intelligence. Another point is the treatment of special abilities. From the early stage, except for Qiu Yi's Flame, the effects of other professions cannot be experienced very strongly. In this case, describing intelligence will make others feel that they have no brains. If When it comes to writing cool articles, the pace is too slow and not cool enough. However, Bu Xie Shuang Wen feels special because there are too many sideways writing methods. For example, those comments and the stickers in them are full of moisture. Then when writing about the relationship between people, this aspect is handled better, but it is also very slow. She wants to write details, so if you don't wash out the details of food, drink, and accommodation, you just wash out the combat details, and it's not that obvious. It's a pity that the details of the battle in the early stage are very clear, because in the later stage, your ability improves, and you have blown up everything in the past. However, the combat in the early stage can also be washed out well, but it is not written out.

How often does it take to update? The eunuch squeaked.

. . . . Damn it, after watching it for so long I'm not going to give it one star. .

I didn't say anything, but I wanted to take a look because the cover looked exactly like my QQ avatar.

I have read a few books with the same theme. Compared with those with the same theme, I think they are very good, but they are a bit watery. Spending so many book coins is a bit of a trap. I hope the author will read more but not too watery😣

I couldn't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 50. It's really bad. As for whether it's embarrassing or not, you can check it out yourself. It's too boring. I didn't give it one star because the writing was very organized, but it was too touchy. Alas.

At first I thought it was hydrology, but after reading more than ten chapters, I realized that the writing is really good, the setting is quite rigorous, and the power system is also quite complete. This kind of system is quite easy to jump, but the author is still very serious. It seems that the writing so far is quite smooth, come on!