Doom Lord
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The end of the world is coming, mountains and rivers are overturned, and the world has been completely gamified. It is also a game that integrates construction, adventure, and life. Cheng Yang, who had been surviving for a year in the apocalypse, was reborn two days before the apocalypse. Let's see how he uses the heaven and earth as the chessboard and the city as the chess pieces to perform a different doomsday battle. PS: There are two updates every day, at 12 noon and 19:00. If the support is strong, it will explode! Please feel free to collect...
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Official(164)Scraped 5d ago
The head can be cut off and the blood can be shed, but the anti-Japanese righteousness cannot be lost!
Go! People's Liberation Army!
A small piece of writing that takes enough care
Qualified novice writing, unqualified game writing. As a novelist, the writing style is not bad, the plot is well-organized, and the content is plentiful. As a game article, the author is very insensitive to numerical values and skill descriptions. For example, the description of a skill for resisting an enemy whose attack is twice as high as the user's is very strange. If the attack is less than twice the user's, is this skill invalid? Also, after the protagonist changed his job, his main output skill became a two-second stance skill. He was able to suppress dozens of melee enemies who were less than thirty meters away from him by relying on this skill alone. The skill design is also very unreasonable. The ice arrow slowdown effect has a chance to be triggered, and it is only 30%. The critical hit rate of each skill is actually calculated separately. In addition, in the plot, only the protagonist's own skill special effects will be counted. For example, when the protagonist calculates the winning ratio against a teammate with a 50% passive dodge rate, the dodge probability is not calculated. In addition, the distance between towns and villages is only 1 kilometer. This is because the distance is not a straight line. The distance between the village and the provincial capital city is only 5 kilometers. The author really has no idea at all. When the weather is good, the visual distance of people is more than 2 kilometers, and after climbing up, it can reach about ten kilometers. According to the protagonist's design, the protagonist should be making trouble in a community on the outskirts of the city from the beginning. In addition, according to the novel, the protagonist allowed tens of thousands of people to live in an area of less than 30 square kilometers for more than a month without water, food or housing, and nothing happened. Are these people still very happy? There's not even a toilet, brother, does the author know what ten thousand people are? The shit weighs three tons, so there are even more things to eat and wear. It's been a month and this place hasn't turned into a smelly shack. It's so magical.
After a few chapters of 400, it started out as a cool read but turned into a dull read. I wanted to scold you for being stupid.
Straightforward balance, no comprehensiveness, the protagonist's character is poorly written and clearly written several times, it's a bad writing. The life of fighting for hegemony suddenly changed into a fantasy race invasion. The world's top forces are a big level below the invading race. What to watch? The author shows the protagonist? I just want to relax and read the novel, and don't want to worry about your fantasy. Bad writing, bad writing, bad writing, come and read this bad writing, I didn't criticize the book, it was the truth. It really sucks in the mid-term. The title of this book is more appropriately called Magical World Invasion. Used to deceive people.
The author needs to work harder
The writing was good in the early stage, and it was in line with the general framework of the apocalypse, but problems started to arise in the middle stage, such as the application of advanced dungeons, secret realms, and the description of the emotions of the characters. In the end, it was obvious that writing the novel was regarded as a deadline to complete the task. Suddenly the pace accelerated, and naturally the overall view laid out in the early stage would collapse, and the ending was extremely hasty. The author may have to practice harder.
Come on, author
This book is very suitable to my taste. I beg the author not to be a eunuch.
When someone wants to kill you, you still scream. Is this a doomsday crisis?
evaluate
I can say that I personally give this novel a moderate rating. The beginning is pretty good, but the later part may be a little bit saintly at times. But we are all human beings in the last days and we can definitely save it. Just save it. I also looked at other people's comments and I can say that some say it's good and some say it's not. This is normal. Everyone has an opinion. Although I don't really like this kind of thing myself, I still have to read it. That's it. I'll give it a medium rating. Read it or not, it's up to you.
A few poisonous spots
1. The writing style is too poor, and a lot of related words are used. It feels like the paragraphs are basically linked by the most basic related words such as "but, but". 2 The middle part of the plot is too boring. There are no fighting scenes. If there are any, they are just throwing ice balls at them and relying on attacks to crush them. 3. There are too many typos. I really wonder if the author published it after finishing it without checking it again. It is normal to make typos on the keyboard, but it is very annoying if you don't correct it.
It is useless for a reborn person to be afraid of the east and the west.
Do you have a misunderstanding about outflanking? ? ! ! !
You can't catch up in the first place, but there are only tens of thousands of ants, so why are you outflanking them? ? ? How did you catch up after taking a long detour!? ?
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Official(164)Scraped 5d ago
The head can be cut off and the blood can be shed, but the anti-Japanese righteousness cannot be lost!
Go! People's Liberation Army!
A small piece of writing that takes enough care
Qualified novice writing, unqualified game writing. As a novelist, the writing style is not bad, the plot is well-organized, and the content is plentiful. As a game article, the author is very insensitive to numerical values and skill descriptions. For example, the description of a skill for resisting an enemy whose attack is twice as high as the user's is very strange. If the attack is less than twice the user's, is this skill invalid? Also, after the protagonist changed his job, his main output skill became a two-second stance skill. He was able to suppress dozens of melee enemies who were less than thirty meters away from him by relying on this skill alone. The skill design is also very unreasonable. The ice arrow slowdown effect has a chance to be triggered, and it is only 30%. The critical hit rate of each skill is actually calculated separately. In addition, in the plot, only the protagonist's own skill special effects will be counted. For example, when the protagonist calculates the winning ratio against a teammate with a 50% passive dodge rate, the dodge probability is not calculated. In addition, the distance between towns and villages is only 1 kilometer. This is because the distance is not a straight line. The distance between the village and the provincial capital city is only 5 kilometers. The author really has no idea at all. When the weather is good, the visual distance of people is more than 2 kilometers, and after climbing up, it can reach about ten kilometers. According to the protagonist's design, the protagonist should be making trouble in a community on the outskirts of the city from the beginning. In addition, according to the novel, the protagonist allowed tens of thousands of people to live in an area of less than 30 square kilometers for more than a month without water, food or housing, and nothing happened. Are these people still very happy? There's not even a toilet, brother, does the author know what ten thousand people are? The shit weighs three tons, so there are even more things to eat and wear. It's been a month and this place hasn't turned into a smelly shack. It's so magical.
After a few chapters of 400, it started out as a cool read but turned into a dull read. I wanted to scold you for being stupid.
Straightforward balance, no comprehensiveness, the protagonist's character is poorly written and clearly written several times, it's a bad writing. The life of fighting for hegemony suddenly changed into a fantasy race invasion. The world's top forces are a big level below the invading race. What to watch? The author shows the protagonist? I just want to relax and read the novel, and don't want to worry about your fantasy. Bad writing, bad writing, bad writing, come and read this bad writing, I didn't criticize the book, it was the truth. It really sucks in the mid-term. The title of this book is more appropriately called Magical World Invasion. Used to deceive people.
The author needs to work harder
The writing was good in the early stage, and it was in line with the general framework of the apocalypse, but problems started to arise in the middle stage, such as the application of advanced dungeons, secret realms, and the description of the emotions of the characters. In the end, it was obvious that writing the novel was regarded as a deadline to complete the task. Suddenly the pace accelerated, and naturally the overall view laid out in the early stage would collapse, and the ending was extremely hasty. The author may have to practice harder.
Come on, author
This book is very suitable to my taste. I beg the author not to be a eunuch.
When someone wants to kill you, you still scream. Is this a doomsday crisis?
evaluate
I can say that I personally give this novel a moderate rating. The beginning is pretty good, but the later part may be a little bit saintly at times. But we are all human beings in the last days and we can definitely save it. Just save it. I also looked at other people's comments and I can say that some say it's good and some say it's not. This is normal. Everyone has an opinion. Although I don't really like this kind of thing myself, I still have to read it. That's it. I'll give it a medium rating. Read it or not, it's up to you.
A few poisonous spots
1. The writing style is too poor, and a lot of related words are used. It feels like the paragraphs are basically linked by the most basic related words such as "but, but". 2 The middle part of the plot is too boring. There are no fighting scenes. If there are any, they are just throwing ice balls at them and relying on attacks to crush them. 3. There are too many typos. I really wonder if the author published it after finishing it without checking it again. It is normal to make typos on the keyboard, but it is very annoying if you don't correct it.
It is useless for a reborn person to be afraid of the east and the west.
Do you have a misunderstanding about outflanking? ? ! ! !
You can't catch up in the first place, but there are only tens of thousands of ants, so why are you outflanking them? ? ? How did you catch up after taking a long detour!? ?
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The writing was very good in the early stage, but the level dropped slightly in the later stage. It's a pretty good book.
Although it has flaws, it still looks good overall.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️+ It's a post-apocalyptic novel disguised as a game, but the writing is not bad. I recommend everyone to read it! ! ! The end of the world is coming, mountains and rivers are overturned, and the world has been completely gamified. It is also a game that integrates construction, adventure, and life. Cheng Yang, who had been surviving for a year in the apocalypse, was reborn two days before the apocalypse. Let's see how he uses the heaven and earth as the chessboard and the city as the chess pieces to perform a different doomsday battle.
The story of the protagonist mastering the golden finger of rebirth and then rising up in the apocalypse is also a combination of online games and apocalypse. If you like it, you can check it out
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