Naruto: Start by Creating a Genius Character

Actually, unless you are very sunny, there is no need to manage your personality. Others only need to ask the sensor ninja to check your chakra, and they can roughly know who you are. For example, Sasuke's Uzumaki follower can know whether your Chakara is dark or not. If your Chakara is dark, guess what the third generation will think of you. To use Dragon Ball's easy-to-understand expression, let Kamesenren sense your energy, and they will know who you are.

I'll give it a 5 for the first few dozen chapters. After all, it's okay to write for free, but it gets weirder and weirder later on, and the wording is inexplicable, like a fairy tale novel. The logic and story written by the author himself are very impressive, so I'll give it a 6.

Okay, I have read a book with the protagonist named Higashino Makoto. Is this book also written by you?

If you want to hear the truth, how about this book?

The reviews for this book are not great, but I generally have to take it lightly. I didn't feel much at first, but later the male protagonist's green tea made me feel good. Later it turned into Danzo Baiyueguang, which made me laugh straight away. However, this book talks more about politics and grasping people's hearts (those who like passionate reading may not like it very much, because there are many psychological descriptions). So far, I haven't seen the male protagonist having an affair with anyone (I don't think he has feelings for the female protagonist, but there are people who have an inexplicable crush on the male protagonist, maybe because of the male protagonist's entry), and I don't think he plans to accept Tsunade, which I think is great. (This is just a personal opinion, because many people like Tsunade, and I also like it very much. But when I think about many fan fiction and Tsunade who are thirty or forty years older than me, I will think of a certain foreign leader who is with my teacher. I can easily replace that photo, so it is unbearable. I can only accept those who are older or younger than 6 years) When I saw the latest part, the male protagonist wanted to take the pharmacist Kabuto as his apprentice, which I didn't expect. Because Naruto is originally a world where blood is supreme, and it is almost impossible to play the finale without blood, but the male protagonist wants to break this setting. Many of my fanfics will end up taking the path of bloodline, even if Orochimaru's genetic technology is used, so I am looking forward to taking the path of a civilian ninja.

Why hasn't it been updated so late today? Isn't it really because of the comments? Although the recent progress of the plot does have a lot of repetitive and unnecessary descriptions, the plot design still feels interesting. I hope the author will not stop updating.

It looks good so far, no big problems, but there will be problems later. Let's talk again

A very good Naruto fan, who wrote about the development path of a civilian ninja with a little trouble but no blood stains. He made full use of modern theories and vision, and wrote a book "Shin Ichiden: My Struggle" step by step! If you like Naruto fanfics, don't miss it. I highly recommend everyone to read it!

The plot and writing are both good, but a bit watery.

😎 It looks really good, but the tm is too short