Time Travel of a Faint Girl: the Abandoned Concubine Turns Eighteen
by The Clouds Are Clear And The Maples Are Clear
About This Novel
She traveled through time, she only remembered that she was injured by a sharp object, and the moment she opened her eyes again, everything changed. She was surrounded by a group of maids, who helped her put on a phoenix crown and a Xiapei, and brought her to a strange man to get married... The handsome man in front of her exuded such charm. The charming man actually became her husband. After getting married, the two people in front of her "respected each other like guests" but the two behind them "respected each other like ice". She could only accept it. Who made her a bad god since she was a child? She was treated as a scapegoat, and after time travel, she became a surrogate concubine... [Revised, re-released version]
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Official(20)Scraped 12d ago
The article is messy and full of typos
Fine
Not finished
The ending! The ending!
Why do you feel like it's Xiao Tao who traveled through time? And the people in this house speak too much like modern people, don't they? No matter how big or small, there is no formality, and the character of the story is unclear. I think before writing about time travel, should I study the behavior and behavior of the ancients? The content is so wild and unconstrained, without any logic or sequence, that people who read it will be confused. That Luo Bier is not like a modern person at all!
I seriously despise friends who are bad at writing. If you have the ability to go home and write a book by yourself, you should treat writing as eating and sleeping. Standing and talking does not hurt your back. The author should continue to work hard, come on, failure will always precede success.
There is progress on the same page, come on, the author is great
Do you want to be so childish?
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Fine
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Community(0)
Official(20)Scraped 12d ago
The article is messy and full of typos
Fine
Not finished
The ending! The ending!
Why do you feel like it's Xiao Tao who traveled through time? And the people in this house speak too much like modern people, don't they? No matter how big or small, there is no formality, and the character of the story is unclear. I think before writing about time travel, should I study the behavior and behavior of the ancients? The content is so wild and unconstrained, without any logic or sequence, that people who read it will be confused. That Luo Bier is not like a modern person at all!
I seriously despise friends who are bad at writing. If you have the ability to go home and write a book by yourself, you should treat writing as eating and sleeping. Standing and talking does not hurt your back. The author should continue to work hard, come on, failure will always precede success.
There is progress on the same page, come on, the author is great
Do you want to be so childish?
. . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Fine
,,
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