Under One Person, a Child's Life? I Am the Substitute Messenger!
About This Novel
Qiao Jie traveled into a world under one person, and was sent to the White Cloud Monastery by his father to practice Taoism because he was born a boy. As a result, he succeeded in practicing Quanzhen Dan. Qiao Jie looked at the purple humanoid creature that appeared next to him and fell into deep thought. Isn't this a platinum star? (No system + Chuyangshen + Platinum Star)
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Official(18)Scraped 18d ago
Write one sentence over and over again
Don't you think "Is that the end?" This sentence is very cool, right? Aroused strong disgust, this is not Jotaro, this is the Clown King
It's stupid. It's clearly written that the result of Platinum Star is different from Jotaro's. It's clear that the enemy was injected with the medicine, but in the end, there was no last hit, and the male protagonist was forcibly defeated. It's rubbish.
I don't like characters with this style of painting, Platinum Star, World, etc. I really don't feel how powerful they are. . .
What is the hero's pursuit? What's the difference between the plot and the original work? Apart from saving a few people and whether the male protagonist is a virgin or a nanny, I can see that the male protagonist is helping others. Is there something he wants to pursue that he doesn't want to do?
Is it over so soon? Moreover, you write purely as a nanny, and then you have no goals, which is very annoying. Who in this era still likes to watch nannies? Isn't that funny?
It's still a cliché about breaking through from a desperate situation, which is boring.
Boy's life? He can also be a substitute messenger
There are several explanations for the boy's destiny in the original work, so I won't list them all. They say a kind of soul mutation, Liu Wukui's Five Directions Revealing Truth, and her brother's sick boy, the substitute messenger came under the same person. It is said that it is an innate superpower. Where did the boy's destiny come from? Let me talk about another thing that I guess, the boy's destiny may be innate power. In one person's world view, everything exists because of Qi. Does that mean that the boy's destiny is caused by the lack of innate Qi to build superpowers? Needless to say, the fairy boy, the sick boy has insufficient innate Qi, so he needs to absorb the Qi of the world.
Can you know Ola Ola's body-protecting god? It's super cool, okay?
I don't like this feeling, and I won't write about survival unless I push the protagonist into a desperate situation.
Hey, I really don't understand this author.
You started killing monsters when you were eight years old. What the hell are you writing about? What's the use of forcing a plot? In the end, isn't it just going to be a bit of a quip?
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Community(0)
Official(18)Scraped 18d ago
Write one sentence over and over again
Don't you think "Is that the end?" This sentence is very cool, right? Aroused strong disgust, this is not Jotaro, this is the Clown King
It's stupid. It's clearly written that the result of Platinum Star is different from Jotaro's. It's clear that the enemy was injected with the medicine, but in the end, there was no last hit, and the male protagonist was forcibly defeated. It's rubbish.
I don't like characters with this style of painting, Platinum Star, World, etc. I really don't feel how powerful they are. . .
What is the hero's pursuit? What's the difference between the plot and the original work? Apart from saving a few people and whether the male protagonist is a virgin or a nanny, I can see that the male protagonist is helping others. Is there something he wants to pursue that he doesn't want to do?
Is it over so soon? Moreover, you write purely as a nanny, and then you have no goals, which is very annoying. Who in this era still likes to watch nannies? Isn't that funny?
It's still a cliché about breaking through from a desperate situation, which is boring.
Boy's life? He can also be a substitute messenger
There are several explanations for the boy's destiny in the original work, so I won't list them all. They say a kind of soul mutation, Liu Wukui's Five Directions Revealing Truth, and her brother's sick boy, the substitute messenger came under the same person. It is said that it is an innate superpower. Where did the boy's destiny come from? Let me talk about another thing that I guess, the boy's destiny may be innate power. In one person's world view, everything exists because of Qi. Does that mean that the boy's destiny is caused by the lack of innate Qi to build superpowers? Needless to say, the fairy boy, the sick boy has insufficient innate Qi, so he needs to absorb the Qi of the world.
Can you know Ola Ola's body-protecting god? It's super cool, okay?
I don't like this feeling, and I won't write about survival unless I push the protagonist into a desperate situation.
Hey, I really don't understand this author.
You started killing monsters when you were eight years old. What the hell are you writing about? What's the use of forcing a plot? In the end, isn't it just going to be a bit of a quip?
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