Five Elements Golden Immortal

They can't understand that the spiritual roots will obviously be restored, but they chose to go to Jinlian to find some heretical ways. Jinlian makes it seem like a system, doing whatever he finds when he finds an opportunity. The protagonist has no brain at all, and it's not like he will die if he doesn't practice. It seems that he can go to universities such as Tsinghua, Peking University, etc., But he doesn't go to Pheasant College and then upgrade to a bachelor's degree.

That doesn't make sense. How many resources did the protagonist spend to advance to the next level and build the foundation? If everyone is like this, how many people in the world of cultivation will be able to advance to foundation building, not to mention the realms that follow! And why does the protagonist have a lot of messy junk skills? It affects the perception too much. Some are magic skills, some are shaman body refining skills, and some are Buddhist skills. Do you have any misunderstandings about the authentic Xuanmen? And the sense of existence of this sect is zero, what nonsense is written in this mess!

1. The definition of money is very confusing. I don't know that the protagonist's spiritual stone is too easy to get, and he gets a lot of it inexplicably. The treasures I bought were bought casually. What else is this called an opportunity? 2. The level promotion is also inexplicable. I keep saying it is difficult. Read the whole book. The protagonist didn't face any difficulties at all, and was promoted casually. Others worked hard for a long time... The protagonist completed it inexplicably. 3. A big poisonous point: whether it is a sect or a star palace. Without any effort, you can freely enjoy the various benefits inside. I saw the Star Palace and competed to become a Star Palace. I didn't have to do anything, without any effort, and got benefits that others may not have been able to get for thousands of years. Then I went to the secret realm to retreat for a hundred years and came out directly as a Nascent Soul. No contribution was needed. It made me feel embarrassed. 4. There is almost no characterization; after watching it for so long, you can tell that the protagonist has a chaotic personality... One moment is cautious, the next is careless, and the next is humane and has a split personality. Others have almost no characterization at all and can't remember the characteristics of any other character. 5. Treasures and skill improvements are also very strange. Working behind closed doors, you can reach heights that others cannot reach in tens of thousands of years. A monk with a much deeper background than the protagonist does not have any trump cards or trump cards. He is killed like a chicken. 6. I really can't stand it after seeing this, please write a comment... I feel that the author's conception and thinking are very childish. He should make a good outline and describe it within a reasonable range, and then the characters should be more distinct and not so abrupt.

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A wave of experience

This male protagonist is really poisonous. It is clear that the spiritual roots of the second-level talent will be restored, but the five spiritual roots have been used as a side path😪. It is a good disciple who does not practice the top wood-type skills of the outer sect and instead repairs the incomplete five-element skills! This is because there is a highway and instead of going on the construction site, there are potholes and rocks! After the identification, the author is poisonous! This is to force the readers to be smarter

Eating it is tasteless, discarding it is like a waste!

Then the protagonist is really not a human being, just an animal, and he can't even help by deceiving other people's treasures? Maybe this is the author's portrayal

The author's writing is still good, keep up the good work

This book is well written and worth reading.