Start with a School District Room
by Sedum
About This Novel
"Ding! Add shampoo to the burly guy on the roadside and get a school district room as a reward." "Ding! Sell the comb to a bald head and get a reward of 200,000 yuan." "Ding! Play the role of a beautician and give a rich woman a beautification... A reward of 1 million yuan and a bottle of super vision eye drops." "Ding! This man bullied an elementary school student and kicked him into a pit. He was rewarded with a BMW x6." Lin Fan had been frantically testing on the verge of committing suicide. He thought it was a death-seeking system, but later he discovered that it was a cosmic intelligent Dharma Brain developed by an advanced civilization. As Lin Fan strengthened, the Dharma Brain gradually showed powerful functions. The more he continued to upgrade the version, the more amazed he became. He knew that he had completely soared into the sky...
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Official(50)Scraped 22d ago
Flatten it
Speechless super poisonous poisonous poisonous poisonous
You all have money, even your cousin bought a car, why don't you go home and improve your parents' life?
I still have the desire to read more.
Flaws do not cover up strengths
The subject matter is good, but some parts are quite awkward, especially the terms "men" and "women" are too awkward. The plot is also a bit exaggerated, and the reasons for rejecting Tang Qian are too far-fetched. Now that we have a system, will we still care about those family backgrounds? Any girl you want to marry has to meet her parents to be tested, so the protagonist's reasons are a bit forced to explain. There is also a body-strengthening potion. I don't want it to be too strong. After all, it is an urban novel. If you make it too strong, it will be bad. I am afraid that it will turn into fantasy in the end. In this way, urban fantasy will not please both sides. Be relaxed, be funny, don't force yourself to be smart and show off. The "seeking death" in the author's book should be more humorous, right? I think we can focus on describing the reaction of the video audience and the reaction of the person being pranked, without being too exaggerated. The character of the protagonist can also be a bit funny. After all, he is a student at a prestigious university, so he still needs to have the necessary qualities. I think even cool articles should be more reasonable. Generally speaking, there are some poisonous points, but they are not very poisonous. The subject matter is good. I hope the author will write better and better. If you don't like my personal opinion, please don't comment, thank you
good
I have read a lot of Shenhao novels. Once I have a system, I know how to spend my money and how to be cool. I have never thought about my parents at home. This is the only one where I think of my parents as soon as I have a system. No matter if it is good or not, it is a 5-star review.
real! I didn't feel the slightest bit of laughter! Are you here to support you? I don't want two of them anymore
Really! The show makes my scalp numb! Embarrassed me to death
Tell me your opinion
The content is quite novel, but I'm not interested in live broadcast gifts. On the premise that these materials are easy to obtain through the system, there is some conflict between the live broadcast and the general trend of making money (although it is done by fans). There is also the live broadcast of the protagonist (exposed too early). If, I mean if the live broadcast gifts can be slightly improved from the beginning, maybe the collection rate of this book will be higher, but generally it is good. Come on.
Why do you have to wear work clothes? Living like this is not a waste of time (it's very troublesome). This is not to pretend to be a b, but to be like that.
If you like someone, confess it, just in case you become a spare tire.
I'll try the poison
Professional drug testing for ten years Tried all kinds of poisons Wait for me to test the poison Prepare me the antidote by the way
It's well written and quite funny. You can read it if you have nothing to do. Please update it soon.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(50)Scraped 22d ago
Flatten it
Speechless super poisonous poisonous poisonous poisonous
You all have money, even your cousin bought a car, why don't you go home and improve your parents' life?
I still have the desire to read more.
Flaws do not cover up strengths
The subject matter is good, but some parts are quite awkward, especially the terms "men" and "women" are too awkward. The plot is also a bit exaggerated, and the reasons for rejecting Tang Qian are too far-fetched. Now that we have a system, will we still care about those family backgrounds? Any girl you want to marry has to meet her parents to be tested, so the protagonist's reasons are a bit forced to explain. There is also a body-strengthening potion. I don't want it to be too strong. After all, it is an urban novel. If you make it too strong, it will be bad. I am afraid that it will turn into fantasy in the end. In this way, urban fantasy will not please both sides. Be relaxed, be funny, don't force yourself to be smart and show off. The "seeking death" in the author's book should be more humorous, right? I think we can focus on describing the reaction of the video audience and the reaction of the person being pranked, without being too exaggerated. The character of the protagonist can also be a bit funny. After all, he is a student at a prestigious university, so he still needs to have the necessary qualities. I think even cool articles should be more reasonable. Generally speaking, there are some poisonous points, but they are not very poisonous. The subject matter is good. I hope the author will write better and better. If you don't like my personal opinion, please don't comment, thank you
good
I have read a lot of Shenhao novels. Once I have a system, I know how to spend my money and how to be cool. I have never thought about my parents at home. This is the only one where I think of my parents as soon as I have a system. No matter if it is good or not, it is a 5-star review.
real! I didn't feel the slightest bit of laughter! Are you here to support you? I don't want two of them anymore
Really! The show makes my scalp numb! Embarrassed me to death
Tell me your opinion
The content is quite novel, but I'm not interested in live broadcast gifts. On the premise that these materials are easy to obtain through the system, there is some conflict between the live broadcast and the general trend of making money (although it is done by fans). There is also the live broadcast of the protagonist (exposed too early). If, I mean if the live broadcast gifts can be slightly improved from the beginning, maybe the collection rate of this book will be higher, but generally it is good. Come on.
Why do you have to wear work clothes? Living like this is not a waste of time (it's very troublesome). This is not to pretend to be a b, but to be like that.
If you like someone, confess it, just in case you become a spare tire.
I'll try the poison
Professional drug testing for ten years Tried all kinds of poisons Wait for me to test the poison Prepare me the antidote by the way
It's well written and quite funny. You can read it if you have nothing to do. Please update it soon.
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