Immortality Martial Arts: Starting from Looking Back

I personally like reading martial arts novels. I was very happy to read the new book, but when I clicked into the first chapter, I was so poisoned that I died. The protagonist is a blacksmith apprentice who traveled through time. He practiced the most basic Bull Demon Power Fist in the martial arts world. He perfected it in one year and then used plug-ins to transform his strength into nothing. Well, we modern ordinary people have only achieved some results in the simplest Ba Duanjin or even bodybuilding in a few years. The protagonist actually said that the progress is slow and the qualifications are low. All we can say is that the protagonist is not the author. Awesome. Later, the protagonist tested his strength and broke the thick tree hugged by three people with one punch! Yes, it was a three-person hug. I confirmed it again and again. You can try it out. The length from the left hand to the right hand of each of us is generally 1.7 Meters. Multiplied by three is the circumference of the circle when hugged together. Then divide by 3.14 To get the diameter of the big tree of about 1.6 Meters. The 1.6-Meter-thick tree just broke! The protagonist said that his strength exceeds a thousand catties. What I want to say is that this is more than a thousand catties, ten thousand catties is more than enough! As we all know, an adult male tiger's palm strike can reach more than one ton, but after testing, even trees as thick as calves cannot be bent. But even so, Tiger's strength can easily crush Tyson, the world boxing champion who can weigh more than a thousand pounds. Based on the performance of the protagonist in the plot, the power is tens or hundreds of tons, and the speed is enough to reach supersonic speed. In addition, in such a collision, the protagonist's body, including the fist that touched the tree, was not damaged at all ~ The Man of Steel is no exaggeration. . . And such a powerful protagonist is just a skin-training mirror with the lowest level of martial arts in the world. There are seven or eight levels of meat-refining, bone-forging, organ-refining, and marrow-refining on it. This is currently known. The protagonist's combat power is just a shrimp in a small county town. I flipped through the next chapter again. Refining meat and killing skin is like butchering a dog. It can be seen that there are a lot of supermen in a county whose per capita supersonic punches are stronger than armor-piercing bullets. Then these supermen have to ride horses to travel a little distance, and they can't outrun horses. . . At this speed, you can travel around the world across the Atlantic in one hour. In the second chapter, the protagonist encounters a robber who has learned some three-legged cat boxing and kicking skills and needs to avoid iron weapons. . . With this physical strength, ordinary iron weapons are almost the same as plasticine. Then the protagonist kills the robber, and a kick can only break the neck. In other words, with this fighting power, a slap can make people become confused, right? The description of the subsequent plot also completely fails to show the abilities of those warriors and higher realm warriors, and they are similar to ordinary warriors in TV series. It can be seen that the author has no understanding of the strength of the force at all, and the combat power is very vague, the description is inaccurate, and lacks logic.

The protagonist is a waste, nothing without a system. Feel free to hand over your core skills. Isn't he afraid that some people will obtain this skill through some means in the future and restrain him, or that this girl will betray him (anyone will be tempted in the face of longevity and strength). After watching the lives of so many strong people, the protagonist's character is still so childish.

Ask the author, how many words do you plan to write at the end of this book? Is the world view big?

The more you look at the back, the more it feels wrong, the less it conforms to human society (Gou/cautious development). It feels like it didn't have 5 stars before it was put on the shelves, but it dropped to 3 stars after it was put on the shelves. You still go out casually when there is danger. There is also the Qianlong list where you are unwilling to go to school. You must have read a lot of books in the memory of so many people before you. Have you figured it all out? Later, there were memories of other people, and in the end, they had to be in the limelight (the plot develops like this). Sure enough, most of these books rely on conflicts to develop the plot, but later it doesn't fit the character (such as Gou, Caution, etc.), Which is a bit unbearable, 🤐 And later on, when we go to the palace, there is an additional female protagonist, and there are many more things to do because of her (after all, the word count is too high? To develop the plot?), And it is even more incompatible with the character design at the beginning of the practice. After all, the Grand Master is just the beginning, and the initial map has not been released yet, 😕 Personal opinion Go ahead, author, I hope this book is completed

After the two robbers came out, they used all kinds of poison. In order to make the protagonist show off, they insisted on reducing the protagonist's IQ and also lowered the protagonist's IQ. I was speechless.

No, is this woman so powerful that she directly understands the protagonist's golden finger? Just outrageous.

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