The Great Tardy Immortal
About This Novel
Why am I always late? Pangu Kaitian was late and was knocked back to his original shape. Zixiao Palace was late for the lecture and could only guard the gate. Fen Baoyan was late, so he picked up a stone. Nuwa created humans and asked me to be a nanny. After reincarnation, she asked me to be a worker. Ah, I obviously know the plot well. Opportunities should be everywhere and magic weapons should be chosen by me. Why am I always late and become so passive? What, who am I? I am recognized by all the people in the world, and I am a late immortal!
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Official(16)Scraped 7d ago
5555😥
555 I read more than 30 chapters in a row, and the one with the most protagonist scenes is the first one.
some ideas
How should I put it? The author's prehistoric story seems to be a high-level prehistoric one. In fact, I think it looks like a low-level one. A Taiyi Golden Immortal actually wrote so much, and even developed a virtual elixir. A quasi-sage actually only has a golden elixir. It feels like it will kill a Nascent Soul to the top. The so-called three flowers gather at the top, and the five qi go towards the yuan to become a Da Luo Jinxian. Where do so many qi come from, this qi and that qi, the five qi are metal, wood, water, fire, and earth, and the three flowers are the three flowers of human essence, energy, and spirit. It is simply impossible for the five qi to reach the original state by practicing only one qi. The five qi are a cycle and a process of enlightenment. The author puts too much emphasis on realm cultivation, so he might as well have more fighting scenes. These are purely personal thoughts and do not represent Honghuangliu readers.
The feeling of a running account, alas alas alas
The protagonist's character is too small and too stubborn.
Give the author a suggestion
Author, you should be cautious about those poorly written routines. , Because no one likes to read poorly written routines. I've been a bookworm for 6 years. I've read a lot of books. I can't say I'm interested in thousands of books, but I still read a few hundred... This is just my personal suggestion.
Slow heating properties
Although this book comes to the prehistoric world as a time traveler, it does not aim to change the prehistoric world, but to depict a complete prehistoric time line, so many of the descriptions in it do not revolve around the protagonist. The existence of the protagonist is to promote the development of the entire plot, but the main line is based on the evolution history of the prehistoric era. It will be interspersed with some of my own conjectures about the events in the prehistoric era and my own understanding of the things in the prehistoric era. In short, it is mixed with private life. Therefore, although this book is a novel, it is better to be said to be the author's "prose". When the main line is not biased, he adds his own knowledge appropriately, so it is sometimes confusing to read. Please contact the context. Although it may be separated by dozens of chapters, it is always useful. There are many lines, and the writing style is a bit scattered, but it doesn't deviate too much, so I hope readers can give me more corrections!
Prehistoric historical novel
The pig's feet traveled through time and became the backdrop, watching all the major events take place in the ancient times. This book is just a record of historical events and conjectures about the prehistoric times. There is nothing particularly interesting about it. It is purely a conjecture and romance about the evolution of the prehistoric times. Therefore, the main purpose of reading this book is to familiarize yourself with the specific events that occurred in the Great and Wilderness, so as to facilitate your understanding of other Great and Wilderness novels!
Too bad
I don't know if the author wants to show off his writing skills or writing techniques It's a mess. The chapters I read basically didn't have anything to do with pig's feet. Can't you just omit a chapter like this? Why don't you just introduce the pig's feet in one chapter and it's over? This is the water chapter, or the kind of chapter that you can read or not. It won't have a dime of impact on the book. .
Update soon
Update quickly, come on, come on, come on
It's a pity that this book has become too eunuch.
Come on, don't give up,...... Come on, come on, come on, come on!
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Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 7d ago
5555😥
555 I read more than 30 chapters in a row, and the one with the most protagonist scenes is the first one.
some ideas
How should I put it? The author's prehistoric story seems to be a high-level prehistoric one. In fact, I think it looks like a low-level one. A Taiyi Golden Immortal actually wrote so much, and even developed a virtual elixir. A quasi-sage actually only has a golden elixir. It feels like it will kill a Nascent Soul to the top. The so-called three flowers gather at the top, and the five qi go towards the yuan to become a Da Luo Jinxian. Where do so many qi come from, this qi and that qi, the five qi are metal, wood, water, fire, and earth, and the three flowers are the three flowers of human essence, energy, and spirit. It is simply impossible for the five qi to reach the original state by practicing only one qi. The five qi are a cycle and a process of enlightenment. The author puts too much emphasis on realm cultivation, so he might as well have more fighting scenes. These are purely personal thoughts and do not represent Honghuangliu readers.
The feeling of a running account, alas alas alas
The protagonist's character is too small and too stubborn.
Give the author a suggestion
Author, you should be cautious about those poorly written routines. , Because no one likes to read poorly written routines. I've been a bookworm for 6 years. I've read a lot of books. I can't say I'm interested in thousands of books, but I still read a few hundred... This is just my personal suggestion.
Slow heating properties
Although this book comes to the prehistoric world as a time traveler, it does not aim to change the prehistoric world, but to depict a complete prehistoric time line, so many of the descriptions in it do not revolve around the protagonist. The existence of the protagonist is to promote the development of the entire plot, but the main line is based on the evolution history of the prehistoric era. It will be interspersed with some of my own conjectures about the events in the prehistoric era and my own understanding of the things in the prehistoric era. In short, it is mixed with private life. Therefore, although this book is a novel, it is better to be said to be the author's "prose". When the main line is not biased, he adds his own knowledge appropriately, so it is sometimes confusing to read. Please contact the context. Although it may be separated by dozens of chapters, it is always useful. There are many lines, and the writing style is a bit scattered, but it doesn't deviate too much, so I hope readers can give me more corrections!
Prehistoric historical novel
The pig's feet traveled through time and became the backdrop, watching all the major events take place in the ancient times. This book is just a record of historical events and conjectures about the prehistoric times. There is nothing particularly interesting about it. It is purely a conjecture and romance about the evolution of the prehistoric times. Therefore, the main purpose of reading this book is to familiarize yourself with the specific events that occurred in the Great and Wilderness, so as to facilitate your understanding of other Great and Wilderness novels!
Too bad
I don't know if the author wants to show off his writing skills or writing techniques It's a mess. The chapters I read basically didn't have anything to do with pig's feet. Can't you just omit a chapter like this? Why don't you just introduce the pig's feet in one chapter and it's over? This is the water chapter, or the kind of chapter that you can read or not. It won't have a dime of impact on the book. .
Update soon
Update quickly, come on, come on, come on
It's a pity that this book has become too eunuch.
Come on, don't give up,...... Come on, come on, come on, come on!
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