
When I Traveled Through Time, I Turned Out to Be Zhao Gao
by Xiao Qin'an
About This Novel
The new book "Time Travel: The Beginning of the Time Travel" is being steadily updated~~The following book introduction: Baili Quicksand was very depressing. In the summer evening breeze, he peed and suddenly felt like someone had hit him with a stick from behind. When he woke up, he had traveled through time. Forget about traveling through time, but! Why is his surname Zhao and Gao! ! ! God must be playing tricks on him, right? It must be, right? Right?
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Official(2)Scraped 23d ago
You have traveled through time and become Zhao Gao!
Why does the narrator still call himself Baili Liusha? The way he calls Zhao Gao and Baili Liusha is very inconvenient and makes it feel like you are writing about two people. Wouldn't it be better to just use the name Zhao Gao? These two titles look really uncomfortable. This is just a suggestion! The fact that you use two titles like this is directly a poisonous point. The title of your book is called Crossing Zhao Gao! Not to mention, you should be a novice and the number of characters in a normal four-character name is still acceptable, so go for it!
The first three chapters are too discouraging.
Is this cultivating immortality or something? I'm so tired of historical novels having this kind of plot
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Official(2)Scraped 23d ago
You have traveled through time and become Zhao Gao!
Why does the narrator still call himself Baili Liusha? The way he calls Zhao Gao and Baili Liusha is very inconvenient and makes it feel like you are writing about two people. Wouldn't it be better to just use the name Zhao Gao? These two titles look really uncomfortable. This is just a suggestion! The fact that you use two titles like this is directly a poisonous point. The title of your book is called Crossing Zhao Gao! Not to mention, you should be a novice and the number of characters in a normal four-character name is still acceptable, so go for it!
The first three chapters are too discouraging.
Is this cultivating immortality or something? I'm so tired of historical novels having this kind of plot









