After a Blind Date with an Ancient Person, is it Reasonable for Me to Be Favored?

Advantages: 1. Novel settings and creativity: The core setting of the story is very creative. The heroine Yan Chu meets the male protagonist Huo Quxiao from ancient times through a blind date software. This time-travel love setting is unique among romance novels. For example, the male protagonist's identity and experience in ancient times form a strong contrast and wonderful collision with the female protagonist's modern life, which arouses strong interest in the readers. This kind of love story that spans time and space breaks the conventions of traditional romance novels and brings readers a new reading experience. The fact that the male protagonist Huo Quxiao is the male protagonist of Machiavellian Wenwu CP also adds a lot of highlights to the story. After the female protagonist learns about the male protagonist's identity, the interaction and emotional development between the two become more complex and interesting. Readers will be curious about how the appearance of the female protagonist will change the male protagonist's original fate. 2. The characters are vivid and vivid: The heroine Yan Chu is lively, kind and intelligent. When she faced the ancient man Huo Quexiao who suddenly appeared in front of her, she did not panic, but bravely accepted him and helped him adapt to modern life. Her kindness is reflected in her concern and care for the male protagonist, while her intelligence is reflected in her wit and calmness in handling various emergencies. For example, when the male protagonist is confused about modern things, the female protagonist can patiently explain to him and help him understand. The male protagonist Huo Quxiao is brave, handsome, courageous, strategic and affectionate. As an ancient school captain, he had a strong sense of responsibility and mission, and was dedicated to making great achievements. But after meeting the heroine, his life goals changed and he regarded the heroine as his most important person. His deep affection for the heroine is reflected in his every move, such as secretly embroidering the wedding dress, protecting the heroine's small statue like a treasure, etc. These detailed descriptions make the image of the hero more three-dimensional and fuller. 3. The emotional description is delicate and moving: The author is very delicate in emotional description and can accurately grasp the changes and development of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. From the initial strangeness and curiosity, to the gradual heartbeat and liking, to the final deep love, the emotions at each stage are described appropriately, allowing readers to empathize. For example, after the male protagonist was injured in ancient times, the female protagonist's worry and anxiety, and the affectionate look and embrace between the two after the male protagonist woke up, all made readers feel the deep feelings between them. In addition to the love between the male and female protagonists, the emotions of other characters in the book are also described very delicately. For example, the respect and loyalty of the male protagonist's subordinates to the male protagonist, as well as the affection and friendship between the female protagonist and her family and friends, all add warm and touching elements to the story. 4. The plot is compact and full of ups and downs: The plot of the novel is compact, full of suspense and twists, keeping readers interested in reading. From the sudden appearance of the male protagonist in front of the female protagonist, to the various power struggles and dangers the male protagonist faced in ancient times, to the female protagonist and the male protagonist dealing with difficulties together, every plot is gripping. For example, the plot in which the male protagonist is framed and his life hangs on a thread makes readers anxious about the fate of the male protagonist, and at the same time, they also look forward to how the female protagonist can help the male protagonist to avoid danger. The story is also interspersed with some light-hearted and interesting plots, such as the male protagonist's incompatibility with modern things and the jokes he makes, which relieves the tense plot atmosphere and makes the story more colorful. Improvement points and suggestions: 1. Logical rigor: For example: In the communication and interaction between the male and female protagonists across time and space, the logic of some plots is not strict enough. For example, the female protagonist just accidentally bought a novel called "Power Strategy" and was able to establish a connection with the male protagonist in the book and summon the male protagonist from ancient times to modern times. Although this setting is novel, it lacks sufficient logical support. The author can add some rules and restrictions on time travel in the novel, or provide a more in-depth explanation of the connection between the heroine and the novel, making it easier for readers to understand and accept this setting. Suggestion: When creating this type of novel involving fantasy elements, the author needs to pay more attention to the rigor of logic and ensure that the plot development of the story conforms to certain logical rules. You can refer to some classic time-travel novels or science fiction novels to learn their experiences and techniques in logical construction. 2. Deep exploration of cultural differences: For example: Although the novel mentions the cultural differences between the female protagonist and the male protagonist, the description of this difference is not in-depth enough. For example, as an ancient man, the male protagonist's values, ways of thinking, and behavioral habits are bound to be very different from those of the modern female protagonist. However, in the novel, these differences are simply reflected in the male protagonist's incomprehension of modern things, and there is no deeper exploration of the impact of these differences on the relationship and life of the two. Suggestion: The author can further explore the connotation of the differences between ancient and modern cultures, and use more detailed descriptions and plot conflicts to show the challenges and confusions this difference brings to the male and female protagonists, and how they overcome these differences on the basis of mutual understanding and tolerance, making their relationship deeper. For example, you can describe the male protagonist's inner struggle when facing differences in moral concepts, interpersonal relationships, etc. In modern society, and how the female protagonist helps him understand and adapt to the culture of modern society. 3. The supporting roles can be more fleshed out: For example: The supporting characters in the novel are relatively thin. Except for the male protagonist's subordinates and the female protagonist's family and friends, the characters and experiences of the other supporting characters have not been fully demonstrated. For example, the villains mentioned in the novel are not clear enough in their behavioral motivations and personality traits, and they feel like they are just tools that exist to promote the development of the plot. - Suggestion: The author can increase the description of the supporting characters to make their images fuller. The past experiences and personality traits of supporting characters can be revealed through memories, dialogues, etc., Allowing readers to better understand their behavioral motivations. At the same time, it can also give the supporting characters more room to play, allowing them to play a more important role in the story, rather than just being a foil to the protagonist. I would give this novel an 8 out of 10. The advantages of this novel are very outstanding. Its novel setting, distinctive characters, delicate emotions and compact plot make it highly readable. For readers who like ancient romance and time-travel themes, this is a novel worth reading. It can bring readers a wonderful reading journey, allowing readers to experience a romantic love story while feeling the collision of ancient and modern cultures.

I found another nice book! This is the first time I have seen this type of novel. It is so novel and interesting. The author must work hard to write it! You can't give up writing! Come on come on! !

The modern plot is okay. I didn't expect the male protagonist to be brainless in ancient times. He saw his brother having an affair with his fiancée and refused to report him. He was poisoned and killed by his fiancée but still didn't kill him decisively. He finally saved the dog from a pack of wolves by a hunter. Back then, he was helpless and furious at the wedding of his brother and his fiancée. The heroine saw the plot and didn't tell him how to avoid the trap even if he traveled through time. It felt like the male protagonist was just a pawn. Especially when the eldest mother was killed, he still had the ability to roar out in revenge. Back in ancient times, everyone was mentally ill. Including the male protagonist and the ultimate pursuer are always more disgusting.

It's a bit exciting to watch, but also a bit frustrating... The hero kills whenever he wants, but he is forced to hold back, which is disgusting. Although I know the reason why the vicious female and male co-stars have to stay, it's really disgusting. If they had strangled her to death, there wouldn't have been so many accidents, and the eldest mother was poisoned to death... It made me angry to see it. The novel is okay, but the ancient people described in the plot feel so stupid! Believe whatever you say, and I can't find out the disgusting things the female supporting actor did. I feel like such a waste... The modern part is pretty good, at least it's reasonable. It's not like the novels I read in the past where it was so rationalized that no one noticed anything was wrong.

Although the front is occasionally a little frustrating, it proves that the male protagonist is cold on the outside and warm on the heart. No one can hit the mark when it comes to family relationships. Although Huo Ling and the woman are very disgusting, who can say that the male protagonist does not care about his father's feelings! No matter what you think in your heart, it will always be a bit difficult to make it. As long as the results are good, that's fine. It's better than those things that are fun in the front, but then you don't like them anymore.