
Ming Dynasty: Become the Emperor Through the Ages, Old Zhu Ma
About This Novel
Traveled to the Hongwu period and became the seventh-grade county magistrate here. Three years later, Zhang Tian became the emperor of the ages. When Lao Zhu looked at his grandson, everyone was dumbfounded.
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Official(36)Scraped 23d ago
What are you writing about? The main character is a social phobia, and he is actually a county magistrate. It's hilarious. What the hell is that at the beginning? Zhu Yuanzhang can enter the prison without revealing his identity, and he acts as condescending as if he were in his own home. You must be smart. Can anyone enter the county magistrate's mansion? No one stopped me? You come in without being informed, and then sit down without being polite at all, and you touch other people's things, or things belonging to the government, are you writing this novel to degrade the protagonist's intelligence or to degrade your own intelligence?
Quite a lot of poison
In Chapter 49, I don't understand the poison powder killing the bandit. Zhu Yuanzhang arranged for the Jin Yiwei to watch the pig's feet. I can understand that Chang Mao and the others can avoid the Jin Yiwei and enter the yard. Can the little bandit cross the Jin Yiwei's perspective and run to the pig's foot? Why are the bandits so powerful?
Almost meaning
The writing is a bit unsatisfactory, but I'll read it when I'm bored.
Ming Dynasty Text - The beginning of nine years of compulsory education to teach people how to behave
This book is non-toxic and is recommended for consumption. It is not a novice. The foreshadowing is good in the early stages, and the author's ability to describe the protagonist in the later stages is important. There is something written about the guest role, I look forward to the follow-up
Too much poison
It makes no sense and the logic is confusing. The author is suspected to be a primary school student
What a fucking stupid protagonist. The author really knows how to write. Does his IQ pass?
Typos in each chapter
When each chapter is updated, can you do some proofreading? Every time you open it, the chapter is full of typos (no less than a dozen). Some sentences are not even fluent, and you still need to guess what you mean. Will it waste the author's time if he reads it himself before publishing? The same typo problem has appeared in many chapters. Is this the author's writing attitude?
Isn't it possible that the protagonist in the end is Zhu Xiongying who was resurrected from the dead?
When the great grandson died, Guang Ling had to stop for three months before being buried. How did he come back to life after not eating or drinking for three months?
The writing is indeed very messy and inconsistent.
A county magistrate is being pestered by a stranger at home, allowing people to come and go from the county office at will. Even if he is an ordinary person, a stranger comes to your house without your permission for no reason. Tell me what you think?
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Official(36)Scraped 23d ago
What are you writing about? The main character is a social phobia, and he is actually a county magistrate. It's hilarious. What the hell is that at the beginning? Zhu Yuanzhang can enter the prison without revealing his identity, and he acts as condescending as if he were in his own home. You must be smart. Can anyone enter the county magistrate's mansion? No one stopped me? You come in without being informed, and then sit down without being polite at all, and you touch other people's things, or things belonging to the government, are you writing this novel to degrade the protagonist's intelligence or to degrade your own intelligence?
Quite a lot of poison
In Chapter 49, I don't understand the poison powder killing the bandit. Zhu Yuanzhang arranged for the Jin Yiwei to watch the pig's feet. I can understand that Chang Mao and the others can avoid the Jin Yiwei and enter the yard. Can the little bandit cross the Jin Yiwei's perspective and run to the pig's foot? Why are the bandits so powerful?
Almost meaning
The writing is a bit unsatisfactory, but I'll read it when I'm bored.
Ming Dynasty Text - The beginning of nine years of compulsory education to teach people how to behave
This book is non-toxic and is recommended for consumption. It is not a novice. The foreshadowing is good in the early stages, and the author's ability to describe the protagonist in the later stages is important. There is something written about the guest role, I look forward to the follow-up
Too much poison
It makes no sense and the logic is confusing. The author is suspected to be a primary school student
What a fucking stupid protagonist. The author really knows how to write. Does his IQ pass?
Typos in each chapter
When each chapter is updated, can you do some proofreading? Every time you open it, the chapter is full of typos (no less than a dozen). Some sentences are not even fluent, and you still need to guess what you mean. Will it waste the author's time if he reads it himself before publishing? The same typo problem has appeared in many chapters. Is this the author's writing attitude?
Isn't it possible that the protagonist in the end is Zhu Xiongying who was resurrected from the dead?
When the great grandson died, Guang Ling had to stop for three months before being buried. How did he come back to life after not eating or drinking for three months?
The writing is indeed very messy and inconsistent.
A county magistrate is being pestered by a stranger at home, allowing people to come and go from the county office at will. Even if he is an ordinary person, a stranger comes to your house without your permission for no reason. Tell me what you think?









