
Food Vs. Rats: a Brief History of Food
by Moyu Lixing
About This Novel
"Do you think our food will have a chance to make a comeback in the future?" "I don't know... But we must at least make one last effort for food civilization..." "You are right, this is our last duty as food... One day... We will be back..."
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Official(36)Scraped 16d ago
Has the author played this game? How many levels?
Very nice
I was wondering, why is your book so good and my book so bad? It should be your writing skills, or else I am too bad. Hey, I hope you can read my book ~ The Adventures of Abu in Locke Kingdom ~ My book has many shortcomings, and I would like to ask the author of this book, the expert, to give me some pointers!
Just one word
Miss you, little mouse.
Very good
How many levels has the author played the game? I'm 35
The writing is smooth, is he a gamer? I'm not old, I'm a primary and secondary school student, and I focus on studying.
If there is something to be done, it will be done; if the cauldron sinks the boat, a hundred and two Qin passes will eventually return to Chu; if a person works hard, God will not let him down; if he sleeps on the salary and tastes courage, three thousand Yuejia can swallow Wu.
Purple youth is a test at every step. Perhaps, every thing, every difficulty, and every setback in your life seems to be a test it gives you to hone your will, forge your strength, and exert your strength. Victory is in front of you. Make the final sprint, seize the opportunity, spell yourself out, and create your own glorious image. Don't make yourself frustrated, don't make yourself regretful, work hard towards your goal!
Feathered here
This is Yu Yuyi, and I have some thoughts after reading the first half. The number of words in a single chapter is a bit low. The normal word count for a chapter is recommended to be stable at 2,500-4,000 words. The overall rhythm is reluctant, the plot is wonderful, and the ideas are novel. Although there are many dialogues between characters, they lack focus. Then there are suggestions for improvement: increase the average word count per chapter. Appropriately describe the movements and expressions of the "characters" during the conversation. After the creatures in some areas appear, give them a brief introduction to make the readers less confused. Then it's time to carefully arrange the plot and character dialogue. Overall, it's a very interesting work. I hope the author can continue his efforts and strengthen his writing and plot design as much as possible.
I have a question
Is the tiger-skinned rat a magical horse?
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This game is not much different from Plants vs. Zombies.
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Official(36)Scraped 16d ago
Has the author played this game? How many levels?
Very nice
I was wondering, why is your book so good and my book so bad? It should be your writing skills, or else I am too bad. Hey, I hope you can read my book ~ The Adventures of Abu in Locke Kingdom ~ My book has many shortcomings, and I would like to ask the author of this book, the expert, to give me some pointers!
Just one word
Miss you, little mouse.
Very good
How many levels has the author played the game? I'm 35
The writing is smooth, is he a gamer? I'm not old, I'm a primary and secondary school student, and I focus on studying.
If there is something to be done, it will be done; if the cauldron sinks the boat, a hundred and two Qin passes will eventually return to Chu; if a person works hard, God will not let him down; if he sleeps on the salary and tastes courage, three thousand Yuejia can swallow Wu.
Purple youth is a test at every step. Perhaps, every thing, every difficulty, and every setback in your life seems to be a test it gives you to hone your will, forge your strength, and exert your strength. Victory is in front of you. Make the final sprint, seize the opportunity, spell yourself out, and create your own glorious image. Don't make yourself frustrated, don't make yourself regretful, work hard towards your goal!
Feathered here
This is Yu Yuyi, and I have some thoughts after reading the first half. The number of words in a single chapter is a bit low. The normal word count for a chapter is recommended to be stable at 2,500-4,000 words. The overall rhythm is reluctant, the plot is wonderful, and the ideas are novel. Although there are many dialogues between characters, they lack focus. Then there are suggestions for improvement: increase the average word count per chapter. Appropriately describe the movements and expressions of the "characters" during the conversation. After the creatures in some areas appear, give them a brief introduction to make the readers less confused. Then it's time to carefully arrange the plot and character dialogue. Overall, it's a very interesting work. I hope the author can continue his efforts and strengthen his writing and plot design as much as possible.
I have a question
Is the tiger-skinned rat a magical horse?
.
This game is not much different from Plants vs. Zombies.









