Prehistoric World Live Room System

The more I write, the more confusing it becomes, as if I am trying to make up the number of words.

The early writing was good, but after Xiao Xuan fell into a coma, I couldn't understand it at all. Who is the real protagonist?

The author wrote this book. From the beginning of reincarnation, I think he was a bit confused. He went from one reincarnation to another, and it was not clear how he died in the middle. And some chapters jump a little too fast.

I suggest you copy the wonderful parts of this novel and then rewrite it. The reincarnation of the injured soul cannot be infinite. I really don't want such a good book to be ruined like this. What a shame. That person had the same feelings as me.

The unkindness of the heaven and the earth, treating all things as stupid dogs, does not mean that the way of heaven is unfair, but that the way of heaven is fair, and all things are equal and treat everyone equally.

Can you tell me where Houtu went? Didn't we just join the witch group together? You have messed up your writing

What is written next? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! That's it for nine reincarnations. I'll tolerate it if you don't write down the specific cultivation system. You're going too far! [Angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] I completely don't understand what you, the author, think about. One world and another world. Could you please ask the author about your world view? It's too confusing. In the later stage, I had no idea what you were trying to express. It was very confusing. Moreover, there are the Central Domain, the Great Thousand Worlds, and the so-called various worlds. How did you write them? ! [Angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] During the protagonist's awakening, he reincarnated into nine lives, and what happened to Chen Xing? Dual protagonists? ! Don't write if you can't handle it well. It's very heartwarming to read. It was so well written in the early stage, but it was completely ruined in the middle and later stages [angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]. The outline is chaotic, and an otherwise good novel is ruined. The prehistoric world live broadcast room system, you can make all kinds of chaos, I am convinced. All kinds of weird planes, I don't understand how your world view is designed. [Angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] The ending is even more speechless. The protagonist wakes up and is treated as a lunatic. Although there is a system, I feel that your ending is too...[Angry][angry][angry] [No more talking. I really can't say anything [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry]]

Descend from Saint to Refining Qi

The author knows what it means that the world is unkind and treats all things as stupid dogs.

Now that you understand prehistoric novels, come and write them. Many places are not good to read.