Bring a System to the End of Han Dynasty
by Immerse Yourself In V And Sigh
About This Novel
It's a loose historical article. It's my first time writing it. Everyone's comments are welcome.
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Official(4)Scraped 7d ago
Why is it written in the first person? It seems a bit uncomfortable. I guess some book clubs will give up because they can't stand it.
suggestion
Mark out the names and biographies of historical figures who have been exposed, so that you know who they are, otherwise there will be a big butterfly effect and you won't even know.
I see you're not used to it
Can't you just write about Li Yu? I'm not used to it. I feel like the author has written yourself into it.
There was no cooking in the Han Dynasty
It seems that the pot first appeared in the Song Dynasty. Before the Song Dynasty, it was boiled.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 7d ago
Why is it written in the first person? It seems a bit uncomfortable. I guess some book clubs will give up because they can't stand it.
suggestion
Mark out the names and biographies of historical figures who have been exposed, so that you know who they are, otherwise there will be a big butterfly effect and you won't even know.
I see you're not used to it
Can't you just write about Li Yu? I'm not used to it. I feel like the author has written yourself into it.
There was no cooking in the Han Dynasty
It seems that the pot first appeared in the Song Dynasty. Before the Song Dynasty, it was boiled.
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