Starry Sky Synthesis Manual

If you want the protagonist to be pretentious and make readers feel happy, you don't need to make the protagonist too outstanding, nor do you need to use other people's exaggerated expressions to set it off. In an advanced civilization, there is no shortage of geniuses. In the early stage of a competition, it is enough for the protagonist to be among the top ten or five, which is already very powerful. You let the protagonist take first place every time, which makes me feel that higher civilization is just like that - no one left. You can refer to the more classic Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, which makes people feel happy.

I don't know what you're going to write anymore. It's so messed up that I can't understand it. If you're writing about martial arts in the starry sky, just keep it simple. You're good at puppetry, and the main character's weapons are all darts. It's really rubbish.

I saw Chapter 52 and it didn't work. I wrote about a woman inexplicably. Don't tell me she is the heroine. The description is too poor. If you don't know how to write the emotional line, you don't have to write it.

The more I watch it, the more outrageous it becomes, because the plot of Jiang Yuebai is really speechless. The male protagonist is seriously mentally retarded and self-righteous. Without a system, the male protagonist is nothing but nothing. He died a long time ago. Anyway, I was very angry after watching it. Jiang Yuebai's previous plots were good, and the male protagonist paid a lot of attention to himself. It's okay, after all, the first part is a cool story, but the story about the woman in the back made me unhappy. The flaws in the front are also magnified. If the author doesn't know how to write a story about women, then don't write it. A few women are just okay as teachers, but the rest are just rubbish. This evaluation is my emotional evaluation and is for reference only.

At the beginning, the story about the girl Berry is inexplicable, but later on comes the talented puppet master Jiang Yuebai. This book is actually not bad, but can you not write these inexplicable plots? If you don't know how to write about emotions, don't write about it. I see that you have written so far that there is no female protagonist, so if you don't, there won't be one. This kind of writing The failure of the chapter is to have a female protagonist, or just brush it off. Although I don't know if Jiang Yuebai is the female protagonist, but the description of the protagonist and her is very 💩. You know, you write a male genius, and you write brothers better than you inexplicably write this woman now. Is the author a star? Is he depressed? If he is depressed, vote

But the author's vision is too small and he takes civilization too lightly. And there aren't many geniuses in there

A rare piece of fine writing! The quality is really good. Anyway, I don't think there is any problem after seeing the latest one!

Very good book. Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

I have been a bookworm for decades, and this book surpasses 99% of original books. It is creative and intelligent.

This is a rare good book in recent times. If you keep it up, it will be as good as Shui Huai by The Super God Mechanic.