Ji Tang

It was going well until chapter 9o (joining the army) when the battle started. Fighting is like child's play!

Let me put it this way, is it necessary to copy online documents at length just for one person or one allusion? There are even some words that have not been changed. Readers can search on Wang Xuance's chapter on Baidu. I'm so convinced. It's free of charge. You don't want readers anymore? It doesn't matter if the free chapters are a bit dull, you just copied all the chapters online, right?

Qiong Yao style emotional pull, and then add a plot where misfortune must be suffered, it is very disgusting,

. . . . Castrated version?

I don't like this heroine. I feel that if the protagonist travels to ancient times, it would be better to have a political marriage directly. It doesn't have to be anything like mutual love, which is unrealistic. The character of the heroine here is eccentric, lively and cute. Do you think it fits in ancient times? And there should be an age gap between the heroine and the hero. When they first met, the hero was 12, and the heroine was held by her father at the time. They were at least five or six years apart. When we met the male protagonist for the second time and went to Chang'an, why did the female protagonist become 12 years old? Because the Xuanwu Gate Change is about to happen, at most the protagonist was 14 years old when he went to Chang'an. At most, the heroine has grown up too fast in the past two years, and you have not combined it as mentioned above. I feel that if I want to write about childhood sweethearts, I might as well write about the relationship between brother and sister.

Forced Qiong Yao style pulling, how on earth does it look so good?

Author, do you write history or novels? I can't stand it anymore! Can editors also become members?

Hello, author_ Teaching and educating people are relatively ignorant of the peasant group, and they have stopped working. The Taoist "Three Passes and Nine Apertures" are popular among people, and they understand the principles of nature. Confucius traveled around the world, and his disciples recorded and compiled records. The disciples were all based on everyone. His words were cast in books for future generations to pass on. Books were burned and Confucians were burned to watch and pass on.

This book is generally good. The author's writing style is very good, giving people a clean and indifferent feeling. He is quietly pushing behind the scenes. Overall, there are no bad points. The storyline is handled well and the writing is smooth. Come on.

Du Ruhui's eldest son was called Du Gou, and his second son was called Du He.