There is Room for the Queen of Medicine Gate

The crown prince of the Kingdom of China is the male protagonist? When will it appear?

It's really long-winded, and it would take several chapters to write just a few sentences. For example, when the Kuang family planned to move to Wuya Forest, Mr. Kuang would glare at his second son and then his third son without giving any reasons. Madam Kuang told Sister-in-law Li to get out of here, and told her daughters-in-law that Gungungun should not make trouble for Qingyin. These were not words that an old lady from a wealthy family could say. The author wanted to write about family harmony and humor, but the humor is not low-quality laughter and scolding. Just a little suggestion of my own, please forgive me for any inappropriateness, no malice intended.

Abandon the article, it becomes more and more unsightly

I want to say that from more than 70 chapters to more than 100 chapters, there is no further plot. . Wouldn't it be too procrastinating? . I have written 30 chapters, all of which are in the family's house. I really like the subject matter of this book. I hope the author will speed up the pace.

The subject matter of this article is really good, but I think it has been relegated to the sidelines. When it gets updated to 300,000 words, I will release it and watch it. The fifty chapters of the plot are inseparable, and four chapters are updated a day. There is no new content every day, and they are all in the water. Just skip and read when you're fattened up. Skipping through dozens of chapters won't affect the plot at all.

Cultivation of immortal literature? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

I would like to make a few comments: First, the author's idea is indeed novel, but the writing style is really weak later on, which results in the writing not flowing smoothly and the storyline not being compact. This makes it difficult to attract fans and lead to loss of fans. After all, no one has time to wait for meaningless plots to amuse them; second, the heroine has been through a lifetime of hardships and should know how to deal with the world. Now the Kuang family almost spoils the heroine to the point of forgetfulness because of her elixirs and cultivation techniques. The further we go, the more I feel that the Kuang family's favor on the heroine is probably more for their own benefit. I hope the heroine won't be so stupid as to give away the skills and pills that are treasures in the world of cultivation without money. This is true wherever love and enmity rise. I hope the heroine will not get lost in this kind of love. Strength is the last word. The three female protagonists and their three uncles are all very old, and they are always written in funny terms, which really makes them feel weird no matter how they look at them, which is very inconsistent.

It's too verbose and has some ink stains.

Originally, it only had more than 600 chapters (I personally like to read long articles with golden fingers), and the first 300 or so chapters were almost devoted to my grandfather's family. Since the heroine is studying fairy literature, I should write more about the heroine's experiences, experiences and opportunities. And the male protagonist, Ah Sha, was written in a way that was too submissive, making it hard for people to like him. As for novels, most readers like the genre of strong men and strong women. But one thing is that the heroine in the author's novel is very good at telling lies, so I almost believed it, hahahahahaha, finally she is not the omnipotent old man with a white beard~ I hope the author will work harder and use the heroine as the main line in everything. Others describe it as a auxiliary line, just to promote the plot, so there is no need to put so much emphasis on it. [Emot=default,67/]

It was pretty good in the front, but a planet travel came directly from the back, and this is where I started to abandon the article.