Heavenly Cultivation Manual

It's really beautiful. The author's portrayal of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when he describes the Calabash Man going to save the Transformers, Sun Wukong's inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song was right to kill Qiao Feng? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji, how could Yang Guo's hand be cut off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't have thought about crossing the cliff with Linghu Chong to seize the mountain as king, etc. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being on the scene, and the character description of the protagonist is very good. Finally, although I have not read it. God

The protagonist is either killed or escapes. I just happened to meet Uncle Feng. This is the biggest unreasonableness. The coincidence is too much, and it becomes a nonsense article. It's best not to have coincidences like these. It's only reasonable to have coincidences that the protagonist arranges for himself.

Holy Father style? It is written like a running account. Except for the first chapter, which has a few highlights, I don't want to talk about the rest😔

Objectively speaking, the writing is very smooth and the reading is smooth and not stiff. My personal opinion is to write more about the relationship between the protagonist and the plot. You can't always describe the supporting characters in detail and ignore the protagonist!

The sense of immersion was good at the beginning, but the later stages when we got to the exorcist police were not that interesting. There was a gun battle in the early stage, and then the dog bit the dog and then the gangster eats the gangster. After that, Uncle Hefeng got rid of Michiko, and then became a disciple. During the practice, he met Chu Meiren. Later, Chu Meiren also became cold, but he survived in another way. , And then started farming, and then found that there were not enough resources to go to other worlds. The same thing happened in Tian Long Ba Bu. After the Beggar Gang cooled down, there were no fighting scenes. Then there were a lot of conversations between characters in the original plot of Tian Long Ba Bu. The protagonist went out on a green bull. There were also fighting scenes on the road. With a wave of his little hand, the enemy was subdued. I've read Chapter 70 and I really can't stand it anymore. I just read this thing for more than 70 chapters. Is the protagonist cultivating immortality or farming?

I just made a loss writing about Liaozhai. Alas, I chose the wrong one in the middle.

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch, touch.

Why do I feel that Tianlong's writing is so messy?

Originally I had a lot to say in my heart, but when I was writing I didn't know what to say. I could only say that I really liked this book written by the author. 😶

Taoist priests must be conferred with the 绯, which is a certificate of identity. Without the ceremonial organ, you will be subject to restrictions, such as praying for gods, praying for rain, raising thunder, dispatching troops and generals, and there is no god to protect the Tao. If you are not granted the 绮, which god will hold you in your arms? You can't even open a forum. If you follow the path of cultivating immortals, why write about teaching the world? It's not rigorous enough. Of course, because of the author's hard work, I'll give you a five-star. In the future, I'll add a teaching circle when writing about the world of Jiu Shu Taoist priests.