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The title of the book is well chosen by the author. It has a very literary and artistic feel, which makes people want to click on it and read it. The cover is also very beautiful and very attractive. When I read novels, I basically read the title first and then the cover. Because I am also an artist, so when I encounter a good-looking cover, I can't help but want to read the book. Secondly, I will read the introduction. As for the introduction, I suggest the author write more. I feel that the introduction is a bit lacking. The introduction of the works in the novel is mainly to facilitate readers to understand the novel and the author's intention, and to help readers better understand the novel. I didn't get much information from your introduction. I don't know the name of the male protagonist, his identity, what is the connection between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, etc. I don't understand it very well. If you make any mistakes, the author can just pretend that he didn't see it.

The author's descriptions of characters and environments are very good. I like the description of appearance very much. It is so lifelike, as if the person is standing in front of me. I think there are some details that the author needs to pay more attention to. For example, there are no periods in some places. I have not found any typos yet, which is really good. Some paragraphs are a little bit long, and I feel that there is a little too much language description. Language description is an ingredient, and too much will dilute the main body. The focus of writing a novel is still on the structure and plot of the novel. In fact, I feel that the heroine's intention is not to add parentheses, it will feel a bit... Emm... How should I put it, the ancient Chinese novels I read rarely have parentheses, but it is good to write it this way. This is also a feature of this novel. It is impressive. It is just some personal opinions. I apologize for any mistakes. Thank you for the author.

When I saw the title of the book, I felt like reading it. I couldn't help but click in and read it. I was not disappointed. It's very good. QVQ is my favorite genre. The writing is very good and the plot is also exciting. I will insist on reading it. I moved to a small bench and waited for the book to be turned over. I really like the author's book. Cheers to the author!

Dear author, keep up the good work and look forward to more articles.

Damn, don't stop updating, come on, the more updates the better😍

Support! ! ! The writing is wonderful. I really want to see the development of the storyline later.

I like it so much. . I beg for more. I will give you the thumbs up to the end. Come on Ollie,

Still very good! I feel really good,

Thumbs up for you. . . The writing is great. I really want to see the development of the plot later.

The author's big cover looks very comfortable, check in and encourage me, it looks good.