
Grandson of Zhu Ming
About This Novel
At the end of the tenth month of winter in the seventh year of Hongwu, the emperor's eldest son, Sun Xiongying, was born. The eldest son of the crown prince is the grandson of the crown prince, and the second legitimate son and concubine are all granted the title of county king at the age of ten! Inheritance is justifiable. I want to create a different Ming Dynasty!
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Official(21)Scraped 22d ago
Mistakes encountered when writing a historical novel about time-travelers
There are two things I want to say, which are also the characteristics of most people who write about time travel. First, they think that I am a time traveler. I have a God's perspective. I am smarter than the ancients and look down on the ancients. In fact, the ancients were very smart, especially those in officialdom. Say, quickly make cannons and guns that are hundreds of years ahead. Have you learned to make this in modern times? Don't think that making this is easy. It is very rare because the productivity cannot be reached. Things must be done step by step, one step at a time. The development of any technology can only be developed when productivity has increased. Just like several industrial revolutions, we must lay a solid foundation and not build castles in the air. Also, Zhu Yuanzhang, the founding emperor of the Ming Dynasty, hoped that his descendants would all be outstanding, and he did not guard against the crown prince like other dynasties. Refer to Zhu Biao. So there is no need for the author to be clumsy or anything like that.
First it was us, but after writing it, it became me. Why is it so awkward?
Why not eat minced meat?
When I saw Chapter 39, there was actually a lot of messy stuff at the beginning, but when I saw the protagonist studying surgical stitches, I felt that it was too low-key. Not to mention that trauma can easily infect the dead ball, and other curable diseases such as typhoid will not kill people? According to the protagonist's method, it is disinfected and mended with catgut. Can ordinary people treat it? Does the military have the financial resources to equip everyone? In the end, the product was not as good as the golden sore medicine! How is this different from Emperor Zhong of Jin Dynasty? I feel like the author just wrote the story with his head in mind, and I really have no expectations for the rest of the story! Moreover, what the protagonist did felt too intellectual. He did not understand the level of technology at that time and just messed around. The level of technology in the early Ming Dynasty. Unless the protagonist was born into a technology master, the level of technology that can jump out of an ocean-going ship and a rudimentary thermal weapon is not something that ordinary people can underestimate.
It goes without saying what Zhu Xiongying's identity is, but the author emphasizes it over and over again. It feels like writing in random words. Is it necessary? Does the throne still need to be earned? Does it still need to be performed? There are too many dramas. When I was playing Milkman, I expressed whether there were too many dramas.
Grand Concubine
I remember that Xu Da's third daughter, Xu Jinmiao, was also very beautiful. Zhu Di wanted her to be the queen after the queen's death, but she refused. The author could consider it, and a concubine would be fine too.
Overall, it's good, but the technology tree is different. However, it's not easy to write without a coherent plot. Many historical novels are the same, and you'll get bored after reading too much.
How to describe the first vassal king?
The higher the status of the vassal king, the harder he must work. Otherwise, if I want to travel through time and become the emperor, I will definitely get rid of the vassal king with a good reputation and military power. I will not get rid of the vassal king with a bad reputation.
In the early Ming Dynasty, Zhu Yuanzhang had a more powerful person than Zhang Sanfeng.
In-depth understanding of the history of the early Ming Dynasty. There were too many masters in the early Ming Dynasty. The history of the first Jin Yiwei commander is unknown in the official history.
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It's been two days since you haven't updated yet.
I'm first
Collected, update soon, no more eunuchs
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Official(21)Scraped 22d ago
Mistakes encountered when writing a historical novel about time-travelers
There are two things I want to say, which are also the characteristics of most people who write about time travel. First, they think that I am a time traveler. I have a God's perspective. I am smarter than the ancients and look down on the ancients. In fact, the ancients were very smart, especially those in officialdom. Say, quickly make cannons and guns that are hundreds of years ahead. Have you learned to make this in modern times? Don't think that making this is easy. It is very rare because the productivity cannot be reached. Things must be done step by step, one step at a time. The development of any technology can only be developed when productivity has increased. Just like several industrial revolutions, we must lay a solid foundation and not build castles in the air. Also, Zhu Yuanzhang, the founding emperor of the Ming Dynasty, hoped that his descendants would all be outstanding, and he did not guard against the crown prince like other dynasties. Refer to Zhu Biao. So there is no need for the author to be clumsy or anything like that.
First it was us, but after writing it, it became me. Why is it so awkward?
Why not eat minced meat?
When I saw Chapter 39, there was actually a lot of messy stuff at the beginning, but when I saw the protagonist studying surgical stitches, I felt that it was too low-key. Not to mention that trauma can easily infect the dead ball, and other curable diseases such as typhoid will not kill people? According to the protagonist's method, it is disinfected and mended with catgut. Can ordinary people treat it? Does the military have the financial resources to equip everyone? In the end, the product was not as good as the golden sore medicine! How is this different from Emperor Zhong of Jin Dynasty? I feel like the author just wrote the story with his head in mind, and I really have no expectations for the rest of the story! Moreover, what the protagonist did felt too intellectual. He did not understand the level of technology at that time and just messed around. The level of technology in the early Ming Dynasty. Unless the protagonist was born into a technology master, the level of technology that can jump out of an ocean-going ship and a rudimentary thermal weapon is not something that ordinary people can underestimate.
It goes without saying what Zhu Xiongying's identity is, but the author emphasizes it over and over again. It feels like writing in random words. Is it necessary? Does the throne still need to be earned? Does it still need to be performed? There are too many dramas. When I was playing Milkman, I expressed whether there were too many dramas.
Grand Concubine
I remember that Xu Da's third daughter, Xu Jinmiao, was also very beautiful. Zhu Di wanted her to be the queen after the queen's death, but she refused. The author could consider it, and a concubine would be fine too.
Overall, it's good, but the technology tree is different. However, it's not easy to write without a coherent plot. Many historical novels are the same, and you'll get bored after reading too much.
How to describe the first vassal king?
The higher the status of the vassal king, the harder he must work. Otherwise, if I want to travel through time and become the emperor, I will definitely get rid of the vassal king with a good reputation and military power. I will not get rid of the vassal king with a bad reputation.
In the early Ming Dynasty, Zhu Yuanzhang had a more powerful person than Zhang Sanfeng.
In-depth understanding of the history of the early Ming Dynasty. There were too many masters in the early Ming Dynasty. The history of the first Jin Yiwei commander is unknown in the official history.
.
It's been two days since you haven't updated yet.
I'm first
Collected, update soon, no more eunuchs









