Take the Warehouse Back to the Late Ming Dynasty

After reading more than 700 chapters, I found many unreasonable plots and poor writing. The entry point of the story and the golden finger are good, but the author's level is ruined. 1. Tens of thousands of soldiers and horses often cross the state and provinces, and the difficulties of the civilians in transporting food are never mentioned. 2. There was no emphasis on the grain production situation. The warehouse golden finger only provided weapons and ammunition but not grain. 3. It is extremely cold in the north. Even if there is grassland to provide wool, it is impossible to supply it in full. Moreover, without cotton cultivation, there is simply not enough supply for everyone. 4. The only money-making projects are glass and cement, which are not enough for the military, let alone scientific research and development. 5. It is difficult to distinguish between the occupation of the Philippines and Southeast Asia by European countries, and the situation of the occupation of Taiwan Yuan Island is unclear. The real historical situation is: Taipei Chicken Coop-Spain, Dajuan-Dutch (Sea Coachman), Philippines-Spain, Batavia (Jakarta)-Dutch, Timor-British, Malacca-Portugal, Singapore is the buffer zone for the war between Portugal and Malaysia, Ivory Coast in the Americas-Spain, Brazil-Portugal. The author please make more historical references. 6. Sailboats sail north and south on the sea according to ocean currents and monsoon winds. You don't just go wherever you want. In winter, you go with the north wind from north to south, and in summer, you go with the south wind from south to north. The speed of a sailboat is only about 4 knots, and the journey from Palembang to Shandong is impossible in one month. 7. The Vladivostok Frozen Port is frozen from October to March of the following year, which was ignored by the author. 8. There are so many mechanical equipments built in Xuan Town, and they cannot support them without lubricating oil. Without lubricating oil, electric machine tools cannot turn for a few turns before they get stuck or burn out. 9. The Qing army was written as too retarded, but Huang Taiji was not that stupid. 10. Zheng Yiguan is a Catholic name, and his Chinese name is Zheng Zhilong. Zheng Zhilong had two sons, but the author missed one, Tagawa Shichizaemon, also known as Tagawa Jirozaemon. 11. Silver coins contain 70% silver content and 30% other substances. People in the Ming Dynasty would not be convinced if they didn't have their brains wet, let alone exchange 1 silver coin for 1 point or a few taels of silver. The businessmen of the Ming Dynasty were not pigs. 12. According to the balance unit of the Ming Dynasty, one pound is equal to 16 taels in the metric system. According to historical documents, 1 tael of silver is converted into RMB about 600 yuan. The various price settings in the story seem unreasonable. To open a grain store in the capital, 1 tael of silver and 2 stones would cost 320 kilograms today. (One liter of rice now weighs 1.25 Kilograms, 10 liters of rice is a bucket, and a bucket weighs 12.5 Kilograms, = 6.25 Kilograms. One stone is about 62.5 Kilograms, or 125 kilograms.) With modern production capacity, 600 yuan cannot buy 320 kilograms of rice, and it is even less possible with the production capacity of the Ming Dynasty. There are still many unreasonable places that have not been mentioned one by one. Although it's a cool article, don't take it too seriously. Characters are often given the wrong names, and they constantly use the wrong number of characters in their names. There is basically no description of the characters and various scenes and environments, and it seems very rough.

There is a weapons warehouse and the protagonist is so cowardly. The Ming Dynasty is already in ruins and there is no way to save it. You still want to hold the emperor hostage to control the princes. You are too whimsical. During this period, foreign countries have developed, so what else do you want? Once you start working, it's over.

Let me talk about my personal opinion first. I have read more than 80 chapters in the book, and I personally think it is pretty good. Many of the information is clear and the explanations are quite clear. However, some of the data are not very realistic because some authors have unclear subjective understanding. But after all, it is a novel, and no one studies these things, so there is no need to worry about it. , There are a lot of objections to book reviews and chapter ideas, which makes me a little embarrassed, but I can't help being a keyboard warrior, just don't read it. I would like to give my personal opinions to the author here. Although it seems that I am a bit nosy, I think it can be regarded as me being too busy. First of all, the description of the characters is still It's not enough. The personality of the characters cannot be revealed, and there will always be times when you can't tell who is who. Secondly, I personally think that the number of uses of the golden finger and the future development direction are not very ideal. For example, I have only been to the system space a few times in the past 100 chapters, and there is no specific description of it. Of course, I am very fond of the master. There are no suggestions on the male character. One hundred people can have one hundred Hamlets. If the author likes it, and the readers like it, just read it. There is no need to worry too much about whether the protagonist is the Virgin or not. I think it is just to hinder myself. Finally, I hope the author can keep up the good work. No matter what other people say, at least there will be people who like to read it. Keep up the good work, Virgo.

Hahaha, childish, IQ is not online yet still cowardly

Although this is a novel that does not require you to be consistent with history, it is disgusting to see you clean up a group of traitors and traitors. Give up, give up

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 10. Is a wooden grenade so powerful that it can blow three people and three horses into minced meat? I'm not a military fan, maybe it's because I have always underestimated the power of grenades in the past. You would still rush to kill the corpses of two Ming soldiers who had been dead for a long time, but you would just take two heads of a few Qing soldiers who had just died. I don't want horsemeat either. Do you think the protagonist should not let him have such a good life just after traveling through time? It's understandable that the protagonist, who graduated from Tsinghua University, has a low IQ, but you can't refuse horse meat in this age where people are so hungry that they are about to eat people. I've only read ten chapters and there are so many illogical places. I don't know about others, but I can't stand it anymore.

Author! The protagonist does not want to be the emperor, and is a powerful minister for the Zhu family to implement the "constitutional monarchy". Once the old Zhu family regains power, you will be a "rebellious minister and traitor" and will be raped and whipped to death. The environment in the late Ming Dynasty is not suitable for "democracy", so it is best to ban Zhu. For the imperial throne of the family, in the early stage, the "imperial system" was used to implement "centralized autocracy" to speed up the popularization of universal education and carry out comprehensive reform and development. When the country has achieved comprehensive and stable development, it will then implement the "constitutional monarchy" to protect future generations from being guillotined by the people...

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Didn't you clean up the battlefield after clearing troops twice? Qing soldiers are no more valuable than frontier soldiers. Why don't Qing soldiers want the things they have on them? Show off your poverty on two border soldiers who were killed by Qing soldiers? Even when playing games, you know how to get resources from the enemy. Brother, I really can't stand your photo like this! Not to mention there are so many guys in you. Really convinced

Maybe I'm getting impatient now. Farewell, what is the character of the protagonist, arms? It's useless to give you an Iron Man.