The Domineering Master in the Late Ming Dynasty

The Domineering Master in the Late Ming Dynasty

by The Victorious Tiger

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660Kwords305chapters
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About This Novel

This is a novel about farming and grinding in the late Ming Dynasty. It takes you into the magnificent history of the late Ming Dynasty by looking at the rebirth of Yang Wenli, a modern gangster, and finally becoming the first emperor in ancient times.

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Maple98mo ago

Doesn't the protagonist climb the technology tree?

There is no technology tree, and no one can say that he is better than the Tatars. Without technology, the protagonist is not necessarily better than the ancients.

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Hard Working Pilot100mo ago

Come on update

I haven't watched it for a few days, and you just watched it a little bit.

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Maple Leaf☆100mo ago

The army level should still use the flag commanders like the Ming Dynasty army, very long ones are better

As for why, it's because the term "battalion commander, platoon commander, regiment commander, division commander" was too different to be used in the Ming Dynasty. It seemed inconsistent, just like how we see Sha Matt from a modern perspective. Feeling out of place. In order to be in line with the society at that time, I hope that the author will use the compound names of the grades at that time. (Please)

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Zero Point96mo ago

If the politics are not perfect, everything you write will be useless.

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Lucky Every Day_be97mo ago

...,

The more I write, the less reliable it becomes...

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Maple98mo ago

farming essay

I like it, come on, come on, the author is great

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User 535600324071100mo ago

Insufficient plot conflict

Farming novels also need plot conflicts in the early stage, as well as character psychological fluctuations and detailed descriptions, especially major and minor plot conflicts that are suppressed first and then escalated. What you have here has been weakened, it is a bit like a flow of water, and it is not attractive enough. In fact, if you can calm down and continue writing your first novel, it will be nice to write more about business and military, political and emotional conflicts. Learn more about conflict plots in other novels, imitate them, and stick to them to succeed.

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Changan 910100mo ago

Very nice, please update soon?

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A World Without Dust_ae100mo ago

Looks good. Update soon.

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Book Friends 2021030176499523762100mo ago

Come on. . . . .

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