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Let's talk about the advantages first: First of all, the writing style is good, there are no typos, it reads smoothly, and the descriptions of various situations are relatively accurate. Secondly, in terms of word selection and sentence selection, the tightness and tightness are very well controlled. Unlike many novels, which have problems such as artificiality, inappropriate word choice, or words that do not convey the meaning, and sentences that are too strict or loose, just reading makes people feel uncomfortable... Let's talk about the shortcomings: First of all, the chosen plot is not good, so the plot is dragged out and the progress is very slow. In other words, the way to make the first pot of gold makes it difficult to get up quickly in the future. Of course, the author can say that he is slow to start, but you must understand that you are writing an online novel, not a historical biography. Most handwritten books are just for fame and fortune, while readers only want to read books for pleasure and pleasure. As far as historical novels are concerned, they don't have to be unhappy, but they must be quick. As an old bookworm, I am quite picky about books, especially books from the Ming and Qing dynasties. There are very few well-written books. Compared with the jokes chosen by the author of this book, there are many books that have better entry points and more complete plots and characters, but they still fail to become popular. The main reason is that the front part is too slow and too ink. Then, the author is too idealistic and clearly writes from the bottom, but the dialogue really does not convey the taste of the bottom. Instead, it has a high-class atmosphere. It does not feel like some vulgar "mud-legged", because the speech is too civilized. Sometimes adding a few dialects and rough language will not reduce the taste of the book, but will be more relevant and deepen the reader's sense of involvement. To be honest, I read about ten chapters very seriously, but I really can't get into it. Finally, in ancient times, people were not easy to mix up, especially the grassroots. If they wanted to rise, they had to integrate into the original social system, or break the original social class. To put it simply, they could either follow the government and write a supporting document, or rebel to the end. For someone like the protagonist, it is better to follow the rebel route. Otherwise, if you want to commit crimes against the wind and eat from the mouth of the gentry class, you will only be eaten by the gentry class...

To be honest, the author's writing is good. I just discovered your new book. I will vote for recommendation first, then order it all, and wait for the monthly subscription. There are too many SBs in the book review for 84! There are too many restrictions behind that, making it difficult to write. Ignore those idiots. Come on💪

Now whenever I see the beginning of that year, I will think of the rabbit

Anyone who spends money to read a book is an irresponsible author. I think it's just to make money and has no professional ethics at all. Tencent doesn't care either

Everything is good, but the plot is not good, it sucks! He understands everything and educates everyone around him into fools! I don't understand. Does it show the protagonist's abilities? There are a bunch of idiots following them to death and I don't know how they died.

Dude, please update 1984. I'm almost thankful for waiting. I thought it was a eunuch, but now that I've given hope, I can't update it more.

It's almost a hundred chapters, and they're still fighting among gangsters in the countryside. It's so boring.

No updates for three days, come on. . .

Let's make a complaint. In the 1960s and 1970s, people who couldn't afford matches used this thing. I don't know if there was such a thing in ancient times. It was very simple. It was just like a braided straw rope. He moved very slowly and didn't seem to smoke much. I heard my parents and grandparents say,

So well written, so well written.