Emperor Song Jinxiu
by Ten Years Of Lingering Dreams
About This Novel
The Song Dynasty reached its pinnacle in civility and gave birth to countless figures who can be engraved in history, such as great writers, politicians, saints, and military strategists. However, it was conquered by barbarians and history fell. Travel through the two sons of Renzong who should have died, change their mortal fate, and change the shame of General Jingkang. I have the system in hand and I have the world. It depends on how one prince will get rid of the bad government, strengthen himself, chase death and conquer the north, and unify the world.
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Official(41)Scraped 22d ago
Too much nonsense, no wonder the eunuch
You talk too much, don't do practical things, and always explain. Book friends are reading books, not to see if you break down the content and see if you make mistakes. Too many words may not be useful. The key is the highlights and concise and easy-to-understand content. I won't watch you write a bunch of nonsense. Everyone knows a little bit about history. Why explain so much? It's a waste of our traffic.
Too much nonsense
When writing an argumentative essay, there are so many inner feelings, so many explanations, verbosity, and a lot of nonsense, which seriously affects your mood.
What the hell are you writing? Is this this manual? The sea, you are so full of water, the sea! You are all water!
The writing is very messy
Writing a short paragraph in a novel can last several chapters, and I am speechless😓.
Embarrassed
Writing something is like playing a game. So much nonsense!
It feels like writing a detailed manual, and many of the contents are repeated. This shows that the author is a novice + a researcher of history.
What the hell are you writing? You're writing novels instead of history. I didn't write the main topic, just a lot of nonsense.
Write more about the main topic, just focus on it, such as power and practicality,
You can write about the practicality or power in a conversational way, with a more atmospheric introduction. Write more about the realistic aspects in the book. Otherwise, it will be just one chapter and it will be impossible to read. If this continues, I will give up the book
What are you writing about? I spent a long time introducing it on twitter.
Neurosis, neuropathy
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Official(41)Scraped 22d ago
Too much nonsense, no wonder the eunuch
You talk too much, don't do practical things, and always explain. Book friends are reading books, not to see if you break down the content and see if you make mistakes. Too many words may not be useful. The key is the highlights and concise and easy-to-understand content. I won't watch you write a bunch of nonsense. Everyone knows a little bit about history. Why explain so much? It's a waste of our traffic.
Too much nonsense
When writing an argumentative essay, there are so many inner feelings, so many explanations, verbosity, and a lot of nonsense, which seriously affects your mood.
What the hell are you writing? Is this this manual? The sea, you are so full of water, the sea! You are all water!
The writing is very messy
Writing a short paragraph in a novel can last several chapters, and I am speechless😓.
Embarrassed
Writing something is like playing a game. So much nonsense!
It feels like writing a detailed manual, and many of the contents are repeated. This shows that the author is a novice + a researcher of history.
What the hell are you writing? You're writing novels instead of history. I didn't write the main topic, just a lot of nonsense.
Write more about the main topic, just focus on it, such as power and practicality,
You can write about the practicality or power in a conversational way, with a more atmospheric introduction. Write more about the realistic aspects in the book. Otherwise, it will be just one chapter and it will be impossible to read. If this continues, I will give up the book
What are you writing about? I spent a long time introducing it on twitter.
Neurosis, neuropathy
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Ten years old D has opened a new book! ! ! ! ! Young seedlings need to be cared for carefully! The previous Republic of China article "The Age of Steel" was harmonized and it made me burst into tears! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It was all harmonized towards the end. . . . . Feeling sorry for Big D... Come on! I hope the new book is a hit! From the introduction, the protagonist travels through the Song Dynasty with a system golden finger, and he should also be following the path of great powers competing for hegemony.
A good book, no cheating, the protagonist does things out of his mind, and the writing is good. During the book shortage in October, I read this novel. It was okay before chapter 200, but after chapter 200, I found that there are a lot of repetitive paragraphs every few chapters. Even the protagonist disappeared from Chapter 300 to Chapter 350, and Han Qi was described throughout. And it feels like the author's description is not like writing a novel, but more like chatting after drinking and talking about a lot of things. The timeline is even more confusing, with constant backtracking, and the same goes for data descriptions. A ship with 200 materials is 70 tons, a ship with 1,600 materials is 800 tons, and a ship with 9,000 materials is 300 tons... Can't you use Excel to make a formula table? Compared with the previous book, not only is there no progress, but there are even more shortcomings and problems!
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