Actually I Am an Alchemist

Why are there still people writing such routine articles now? At the beginning, I meet an old grandfather. The grandfather has a beautiful granddaughter. There is a scumbag next to the granddaughter. When the granddaughter meets the male protagonist, she becomes a loser with weak legs.

I have a child at an old age... I just gave birth to a child at around 30.40... And the author is really straight... Either a beauty or a woman...

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Nonsense, nonsense, random writing

Except for skipping the trip to another world, everything else is well written and nothing too bad.

Dissuade him from quitting in the first three chapters! A patch of medicine costing 3,000 yuan cures rheumatism in half an hour! If there really was such a protagonist in reality, he would never see the sun the next day! Ridiculously childish!

I really feel that the male protagonist is an alchemist is a good line, and the old man buying ointment at the beginning is fine. I was very disappointed later on. I felt that the character of the male protagonist was not good or had not established his character. This was the first time I read a novel and felt so uneasy. I even went to Penguin Reading to write a review. First of all, I have not finished it because I was not interested anymore. But what I like about this subject and the beginning is that the emotions are written very lightly. I just read chapter 14. First, the old man doesn't necessarily have to write that he only has a daughter at the beginning. In my mind, this is the beginning of the stallion novel. Second, the relationship progress is nonsensical. Is the male protagonist lustful or not? As of now, he is lustful and gets carried away when he sees a woman. What the hell, what I hate the most is the protagonist with this kind of character. His relationship progresses very quickly. Overall, the writing is not good, and the relationship feels inexplicable and unrealistic. When I meet young people, they are basically women, and they are all beautiful women. This is outrageous. Third, Ding Xuan, the character design is not well established. As a daughter whose mother is suffering from illness, she has to work early to earn money. She should be strong. I have no problem with you writing about being weak, but please write better and make her more three-dimensional. Writing about a person who is weak does not necessarily mean using cute, pitiful, delicate, and so on. You must use it well, instead of making people feel that she is a white lotus or a silly, white and sweet lotus when they see Ding Xuan like this. The most shocking thing is that I have been a neighbor for several years and have no feelings for each other, so I just change a light bulb. After seeing each other for a few times, I feel very good about him. There is no logic at all. I live alone and let an unfamiliar man come into the room to change the light bulb in the middle of the night! Is she not defensive at all? This is not like a person who lives in an urban village and works hard to make money. It's such an unwise thing to do. Fourth, is there only one hospital? Knowing that Dr. Liu is not a good person, he still dares to take his father for examination. Is there only one hospital and one doctor in the world? Speechless Fifth, you are not suitable for writing emotional dramas. It is recommended that you do not use emotional lines.

After reading the beginning, you already know the sequel. What else can you expect from this book? Most importantly, he also cursed

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The author describes that the gray and black fire in the protagonist's body may have been in the protagonist's body, but was triggered by the alchemy furnace. And based on the description of the protagonist's smoking habits in the book, I concluded that the protagonist who could smoke has not died yet, so the source of the gray and black fire is self-evident. It is definitely the smoke left in the protagonist's body! Hahaha