Douluo: Wishful Thinking Qingtian

The elders of Shrek's Poseidon Pavilion sometimes took the initiative to eliminate evil soul masters, and they all retired in the golden tree. Only those students at the level of Soul King, Soul Emperor, Soul Saint Soul Douluo were allowed to eliminate the evil soul masters, and they even said it was for the whole continent. The original book clearly stated that Poseidon Pavilion can determine the future direction of the continent, and even decided to go against the will of heaven several times. Mu En himself directly defined the evil soul as the evil soul master who beat him to death with a stick. There are two clear members of the Holy Spirit Cult, Scorpion, Tiger and Wuyun, who were forced to become evil soul masters by Shrek. How did those secret soul bones come from? Even a soul emperor-level teacher from the outer courtyard can show what they have become. You still whitewash and beautify Shrek. It is really impossible to clean up Shrek. No matter how many times he fights, Shrek is the biggest cancer in the entire continent.

The setting of the protagonist's sister is really useless. She is a tool in the whole process. A problem that the protagonist of the Soul Master Competition can easily solve. You have to expose the fusion skills of your twin martial souls and your own martial soul. Are you worried that Shrek will not come to solve you? Everyone can go into the palace to kill Xu Tianran openly, but it is not easy to kill you. The Star Dou Forest saved someone's life inexplicably. In the Douluo environment, he also saved a stranger. No acquaintance would put himself in danger. He was a showman and had an archway. As mentioned before, the twin spirits cannot be released, so they can be used directly later. It is still a competition that the whole continent is paying attention to. It is so awesome that no one will accept the pursuit order privately. For the 100 million gold soul coins you paid for a hundred thousand year old embryo (the Snow Emperor Embryo, but no one knows it), you really have lived a long time, what other soul skills can you use to make people laugh?

There are too many private settings, and a lot of original characters have to be created. If the Sun and Moon Royal Family really had a Purple Dragon Spirit, they would have already cultivated it. It is unreasonable to have a lot of original characters, and then the whole Black Monkey thing is not as good as the entire Twin Spirits. The subject matter is good, but the author's writing is not good.

Dear readers, would you like to know who the heroine is? Is it an original character or one from the original work? Is there a single heroine or two heroines? Is the author still a single person? It's not possible to write with multiple heroines!

Although it is good-looking, it is a little bit toxic. Although the protagonist sides with the sun and the moon, and although he does many things in favor of the sun and the moon, there are too many safety risks, too many unstable factors, and it is a bit too naive and takes things for granted. 1. Take Huo Yuhao, his soul is still with Tang San, how do you know he won't be taken advantage of? 2. Sell soul guides to Qibao Glazed Sect. 3. Reveal the battle armor to Douluo forces. 4. Cooperation with the Noumenon Sect is equivalent to selling out the Doukai technology, and it does not restrict the Noumenon Sect's people from participating in the war. Of course, you are the author and you have the final say, but to be realistic, or to put it more realistically, I don't know where the protagonist is being sold.

This book was ruined when I saw that the protagonist, an idiot, took Huo Yuhao as his younger brother. The author's brain? His mother's soul is in Tang San's hands, what do you think is the use of helping him? Are you waiting for a knife later? Really funny Didn't you consider it when you wrote about Peerless Tang Sect? Moreover, due to the saturation problem in the God Realm, even if you believe in becoming a god, you will only be half a god king. Unless you inherit the five great god kings, it is basically impossible.

1. It was that game, a battle that could be solved easily, but some trump cards had to be exposed. For example, with the autogenous martial soul fusion device, the protagonist could win if he used it, but he forced his sister to reveal his twin martial souls and martial soul fusion skills, and then made up a reason, saying that he wanted to use Ren Jun to obtain the training method of twin martial souls. This reason can barely be said, and then it is said later that this reason is just to fool Ren Jun. However, what is the reason? Don't know 2. In the scene of rescuing people, is the protagonist familiar with this woman? The two of them had probably met once before. It doesn't matter that this woman was kidnapped by the evil soul master. She went to the protagonist for help instead of looking for anyone else. It can be said that she only knew the protagonist and only thought about the protagonist. She hoped that the protagonist was looking for reinforcements and so on. The protagonist didn't know what the strength of the opponent was, so he just went for it. After knowing that the opponent was a titled Douluo, he just exposed his biggest trump card - the ghost upper body. I just want to ask the protagonist what he wants from him? Talent, beauty, or kindness? I think the previous plot is okay, but I just feel that this part of the competition is inexplicable. I don't know what the author is thinking. Is he just trying to make the protagonist show off?

There are many unreasonable places. If you want to write a cool article, just write a cool article safely. What are you writing?

Treat Huo Yuhao like a father. Tangshan has a beautiful soul. If Huo Yuhao was not his dog, he would definitely be stabbed. Since he was stabbed, why should he still be his father? The big and small brains are fighting each other.

This book is supported purely by writing. If you don't care about Huo Yuhao's life or death. It will look much better. She went to work as a nanny for Huo Yuhao. Too licking. If he were a woman. You can still see through his criticism. It can also be used as a booster. After all, love the mainland. I understand everything. But he is a man. He was also targeted by Buddha. Neither relatives nor friends. It clearly does more harm than good. His life and death have nothing to do with you. There is even a risk of backstabbing. Baffling. Purely thankless. Have this intention. You might as well take care of the people around you. Finally, the protagonist is named Kong Xuan. It actually comes with a golden hoop. It really doesn't match. It looks like shit in the food. The author of Born Evil 😓