Douluo: the Sun and Moon Are in the Sky, Where is the Destiny!

What is the definition of super martial spirit? Have you read the original work? I'm confused. What does it mean to be completely in control, so it doesn't meet the world's definition of a super martial spirit? As I said before, aren't the Holy Dragon of Light, Holy Dragon of Darkness, and Holy Angel all super martial souls? It's normal for fan fiction to have its own setting, but you don't want to change it too outrageously, otherwise you can just say that you have traveled to the Douluo parallel world. You have to have your own weird setting and you want to write a fanfic of the original Douluo work. You are just like the half-baked genius invincible style I mentioned later, you just come up with something as soon as you think about it. They both want and want I don't know what path the author wants the protagonist to take next. These two martial arts are so outrageous. The protagonist is like an idiot and doesn't even know if they are super martial arts. He who doesn't know his IQ thinks he is a native of Douluo. It is also a big shame for the time traveler. I think these two spirits are so powerful that they are among the best among super spirits, especially the dragon spirit which has the potential to evolve into a god-level spirit. The author writes this way, obviously letting the protagonist follow the genius flow and the invincible flow. The protagonist is extremely talented. He relies on family power and his own talent to win over the big family and talented teammates, and he advances all the way and crushes countless talented people. This is the invincible genius style. The way you write now can be said to be half-baked. The protagonist's martial spirit is very strong. In the future, when you choose teammates, do you also need to choose teammates like the Snow Shadow Spirit, who is at the same level as the White Tiger Spirit? Or do you want the protagonist to use his own abilities to evolve the martial souls of all his teammates? How can martial souls evolve so easily? [Emot=default,14/] It is possible for the Star Holy Sword to evolve into the Star Divine Sword. Some martial souls are finalized and cannot evolve unless they find fairy grass. But if the martial soul is relatively ordinary, even if the fairy grass comes, it cannot be allowed to evolve directly. At most, it can be enhanced. [Emot=default,14/] The protagonist uses his powerful martial soul to force others to evolve. If you want to write like this, why are you looking for those geniuses? Just find some friends you are close to and help them evolve their martial souls, and we'll form a team. This is why I say that the author writes a half-baked genius invincible stream. [Emot=default,06/] First, the protagonist's martial spirit is very strong, but some of the teammates he is looking for are not ranked at all. They are all in Douluo III. The protagonist's carefully selected teammates also have top-level middle-level martial arts, and they only have martial soul fusion skills. Xue Ying's martial soul teammates do not have such heaven-defying abilities. For this goal, I still want to train them to the lowest level of quasi-god peak, preferably to become gods. In Douluo 3, the protagonist's teammates are like Tang San in Douluo 1, relying entirely on Tang San's own help, otherwise they will not be able to become gods at all. [Emot=default,06/] Secondly, whether it is to visit various geniuses or to make teammates become gods together, the protagonist wants to win over the geniuses on the mainland, but he is still a dabbler. There are so many other geniuses, you can try it anyway. The protagonist is not intelligent enough to even think of looking for other geniuses. I'm willing to stay in front of my own house and look for them. If I get two oil bottles in my team, do they rely on you to replenish them? You might as well help them practice directly. If you have the ability to evolve martial arts souls for them, you don't need to find geniuses. You can just find a few people to form a team. I originally wanted to ask the author to revise it. After all, the plot is really good. It has not been this good for a long time, and I am very reluctant to let it go. Later, I thought it was impossible. There were a lot of IQ deficiencies and setting problems in the author's book, as well as errors that were completely different from what was stated in the original work. All I can say is that if the author reads the original work again, he may not be able to change it. Captured by heart, the next writing is still coming out as it comes, without checking whether it is right or wrong at all, it is really uncomfortable to watch😭

Go high and low, find some stupid martial souls as teammates, don't want the talents in the original work, give Tang Wulin awesome talents, and the people you find will help them change their martial spirits. You find the talents in the original work, give them powerful souls, or soul rings. If you calculate the cost, do you still want to kneel down to Tang Fozu's son?

The author is not as familiar with the setting of the original work as I am. I have only watched the Douluo One anime, heard some basic knowledge about Douluo Two and Three, and read Douluo fan fiction for half a year. When I encounter problems with fan fiction, I can basically find it myself and explain what is wrong and how to correct it. If you are not sure, just check to see if it is written in the original work. Of course, if the setting of the original work is confusing, ignore it. At least the original work has a clear setting and I will not talk nonsense. If you don't know, I will check it. In fact, what I said above is very polite. If you want me to say that the author has strength but not strength, and attitude but not attitude, not only do I not know it, but I also don't check it out. Compared with the first two parts, Douluo 3 has many super martial spirits and many martial spirits with heaven-defying abilities. Anyone who has read Douluo III will know that the most different things in this novel from before are Doukai, Mecha, and Super Martial Spirits. I have no ability. I must have read Douluo III before writing a fanfic. You can completely remember such important basic knowledge. It's understandable that I usually remember wrongly, but I must have thought carefully before writing, and I didn't even remember it at all? He has no attitude. From the fact that he reads novels in order to write fan fiction, and when writing fan fiction, he thinks he is right and writes without checking it out. It can be seen that his attitude is very arrogant.

If you look at the plot from the perspective of a Machiavellian, there's nothing wrong with it. But this is a QQ novel, there is no Seuse, no motivation So you missed the plot of ntr Yali, ntr Demon King, ntr Silver Arowana

Even Orange's martial spirit has turned into a bun, talent

It was okay. It was fun to watch the one where Tang Wulin joined the Spirit Pagoda and Gu Yue destroyed the Tang Sect branch. The others were bland and not very exciting. After all, don't you always write without a female protagonist? It doesn't look like your book has a female protagonist. If there is no female protagonist, then we can only look at the interestingness and excitement of the plot. There are also a lot of settings, of course they are explanatory settings, and many of them have flaws. For example, you summarized Tang San's three chances to take action, but from what you wrote, you also know that Tang Wulin encountered the evil soul master, and then Tang San took action to kill the evil soul master. In addition, this is Tang San's fourth time. Of course, I didn't mention that Dou Erjuzi's martial spirit became a steamed stuffed bun, and then he didn't change it after being reminded by the readers, etc.

The beginning of the story can also trick readers into it. As long as they have read ten chapters, the rest will be full of poisonous points. The author knows nothing about martial arts settings at all, just like the master Xiaogang. I added a lot of weird martial arts settings myself, and then said they were written in the original work. I think as a fanfic, if you want to add settings yourself, you can just add them yourself. I really didn't expect it to be so outrageous and weird that you still insist on saying that it's in the original work.

Don't say anything else, those powerful characters in the original novel should not be picked up as a pile of rubbish. I'm wasting my energy on cultivating them and needing their approval. I'm really speechless. The main character is so lickable. If you want to accept them, just accept some powerful ones. What's the use of a bunch of rubbish supporting characters who have to be cultivated by yourself? It doesn't help the protagonist at all, the protagonist still has to guide them. I found myself a group of dads, this is it.

The author just wanted to write that the supporting characters are all drunk, the protagonist is sober alone, and the supporting characters are all brainless fools.

History, the combat power settings in more than 110 chapters are so rubbish. It was completely written by AI. Three attacks by a first-level god will not kill a quasi-god in seconds. It actually requires Yun Ming to sacrifice a divine throne to kill Chen Xinjie, the God of the Sea, in seconds. Everyone who sees this will think that it was written by AI, and the Xiong Jun section is also quite problematic. I don't believe that Di Tian, ​​who has been in Dragon God for the longest time, can't recognize the soul bone aura even if the aura is wiped out. It's impossible to retain any aura. A protagonist who is over 30 levels, even if he is awesome, can't be so illogical, okay?