Tribe from Heaven

To be honest, this book is quite average. An old bookworm like me doesn't want to continue reading the first page. Why? The protagonist is in the primitive era. Is there an orphanage in the primitive era? Even if you want to call it an orphanage, you should introduce it. Why is it called an orphanage? What name did it have before? Does the protagonist just call it an orphanage, or do the tribesmen collectively call it an orphanage. There is also a place where the protagonist boils water and cooks vegetables. Anyone who knows a little bit of common sense knows that stones will crack when they are burned on fire and water is added. You can write about ceramics. Just explain the tribe and why there are ceramics? That's why, that's why we old bookworms don't like to read it, there are too many loopholes, bro.

I saw 130 photos, which didn't make me happy. The highlighted part. Although he is a modern person, he does not reflect anything, so he might as well write about indigenous people. Also, to get a fish, you have to build a net first, which takes three years, which is quite useless. Don't you know how to fish? Don't you know how to make earth dragon traps or something? You have to learn how to use the Internet from the beginning, and it is taught by the indigenous people. Rubbish.

It's nonsense, no one wants to go, there will still be authors writing and readers reading; but one thing is true, the psychology of wanting to go is just the same as a child's desire to enter the world of adults.

The writing is really bad, my brain is so bad

Does the author have a single heroine in this article?

Only one person commented on more than 500 chapters. I'm afraid it will poison me.

It's a pretty good novel, but I don't know why it's not very popular.

It's not easy. There are so few posts.

Running account?

To be honest, the writing is really average. Not a bit cool.