Self-cultivation of the Earth Immortal

The author is great. I have read Chapter 45 now, but I just feel that the article lacks something. It feels like it is always narrative, without the sense of reality that other good articles have. It always feels like a hazy layer of fog is isolating my feelings. Can you tell me something? Discuss discuss

I personally feel that this is a very good novel, but the positioning of the author's work is not accurate. Starting the novel as an earth god at the beginning is indeed in line with the logic of promotion in the world, but it can only attract readers of farming literature and earth gods. The later plot development and protagonist upgrade were too fast, like a quick-paced narrative, with good ideas but insufficient writing. Moreover, the protagonist relies on the resources of the world to grow while avoiding too much contact with others. Although he can use the treasure to accuse himself and avoid his own big cause and effect exposure, it seems that the protagonist is disconnected from the world, and the reader cannot understand the complete framework and details of the novel world from the perspective of the protagonist. Especially since the protagonist has experienced so many different places, there should be stories about various tastes of the world and the customs and customs of various places. The customs are different from hundreds of miles away, not to mention different worlds, but the author's writing skills are not strong enough and the performance is not good enough, which is a pity.

In a blink of an eye, a thousand years passed, and Su Zizhan said that the river was going eastward, and the eternal wind and rain had blown away. The past is gone, but we still don't have the courage and qualifications to look back in confusion. The sky and the earth are long, and the Yangtze River is surging, turning the axis of time. The ruts are deep, the sun is blazing, and the emotions of the world are revealed. The remaining willows on the ancient road are blown by the wind, and you can see the distant mist in the evening light. Standing on the shore of the lake for a long time, you can see the shadows of birds, the sand and stones are vivid, the grass is dancing with the wind, and crucian carp and carp are chasing the waves. Standing on an isolated wooden bridge, watching three thousand weak waters flow by, how uncomfortable is it for one's heart! In the past, Taibai was drinking wine in the wind, Shaoling's furry horses were wild; Jiaxuan was drunk with lamps and swords, and Wu Mu was furious. The ancients have made stars in the sky, and their appearance can be said to be passionate; their nature can be said to be the heroes of the world. Among the gentlemen in this world, those born in the 1980s are the core. Some are obsessed with personal relationships with their children, or others are obsessed with worldly distractions. There are many mediocre people in human life, so how can we imitate others? A gentleman should care about the country and the people when he is in an official position; he should also prosper his family and business when he is in the market. Don't you see, the country is so majestic that you should give it a try? Don't you see, can the misty sea of ​​clouds tell the world? Kunpeng's ambition is to reach a thousand miles, how can it be compared with the frog at the bottom of the well? The sky is dark and the rain is coming, the flags are not moving but my heart is far away. The vast mist makes it impossible to see the way back, and the rain and strong wind make it difficult to find the way back. Sigh, it is difficult to move, and my clothes are wet; unfortunately, time has passed and my fame has not been established. Sadness, Huafa was born early as a insect; enlightenment, life was wasted seven feet in vain by doing nothing in this world! The lone star accompanies me, and the bright moon lingers. The graffiti is incomprehensible, but I am so sentimental that it makes me laugh.

A wave of experience

I haven't finished it yet, but it's enough to give it four stars. I'll see if I can give it five stars after watching it.

Come on, update, no more eunuchs.

I have read 20 chapters. The subject matter is very good, and the author's writing style is very good for online articles, but the logic is flawed and often inconsistent. In general, "the sculptor is carving shit". Doesn't the author intend to seriously construct a world logic?

Good book. Why isn't it updated? You can't cut it anymore, right?

The logic is very good and the training system is complete.

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