Starting from the Huangliang Dharma Ceremony

What I have written recently is really watery, almost like a running account.

1. The description is very bland, whether it is getting inheritance or winning various competitions in the House of Lords. 2. The bland plot feels like it's just muddle along and has no goal. I wrote about wanting to go back to the original world, but it also felt like it was dispensable. 3. Eat settings, such as very important talent spells. The uncle can be promoted to the sixth level with a talent related to the esophagus. The three talents on the protagonist's side are dispensable. They can neither assist combat nor be beneficial to cultivation. It makes people feel, oh, there are three excellent talents. According to the setting, shouldn't the development be based on three talents? After being promoted to the eighth level, there is another minor magical power. This has nothing to do with the three talents. 4. A large number of name explanations that have nothing to do with the plot. 5. The small world is the same, but it does not describe the help of the small world to the protagonist. It keeps investing in the small world, but does not pay attention to one's own practice. At the same time, it does not reflect the role of Huang Liangmu's innate spiritual roots. I don't know what will happen in the future, but the theme is still good.

The three golden chapters that should be there at the beginning don't exist, and after reading ten chapters, it's still a running story.

Update quickly, I have only raised more than 30 photos. After raising them for so many days, you still have trouble getting enough, so update quickly. Update faster, faster. Look how cool it looks now. The first few openings you make are not attractive, but when you see more people following you, you feel attractive.

In fact, you can write a little more space inside. And now that the protagonist is still practicing in the academy, you have seen almost 200 pictures. He is still practicing in the academy, so now the main plot can be placed in the space. You can say that you can add more functions, or like the adventure in that one, you can also write more. Otherwise, when you write about your studies now, it will feel like a running account, because all day long, besides practicing, you also have classes. Oh, I can write about the tasks in that academy. And I always feel like something is wrong. The protagonist is now at the sixth level. I always feel like that's what it's all about? It's a bit of a pulling feeling. It seems that the sixth level realm is nothing special.

Excellent work, not enough, please update

Update it quickly. After raising so many geniuses, I can update a few chapters. You can't do it. 😘😘

There are too many introductions 13 20 24 and no content.

I'm going to start raising you now and wait until you reach 500,000 words. Come on.

Another suggestion is to describe the feeling of the Fa conference from the perspective of others. I don't know what other people think of it, but I think it's okay.