Northern Song Dynasty Official Family

I mentioned the inner description repeatedly before, but there are more than 20 pictures that do not push the plot. If you are not bored, it would be really difficult to watch. Moreover, the inner description still repeats one sentence over and over again, which is too wordy.

There are too many descriptions in my mind, and they are too wordy. It is a good thing to describe something from your heart, as it can help readers understand it better. But some things can be explained clearly in one or two sentences, but the author has to write three or four paragraphs and talk about them over and over again. This is writing a web article. Most people want to see the plot and a little bit of psychological description is a good trick. Repeated psychological descriptions in long paragraphs will test the readers' patience. The author also had this problem in his last book, and I hope he can pay attention to it.

It's outrageous. There should be a thousand Hamlets in the minds of a thousand readers, but the author has to explain the protagonist's motivations and thoughts clearly in every plot. I am reading a novel, not an analysis of reading comprehension.

Chapter 2: Persuading to retreat. The protagonist's past life is completely useless, he doesn't distinguish between grains and grains, he doesn't remember literature and history, he doesn't understand physics and chemistry, and he doesn't have a golden finger. What is the use of this protagonist? ?

The author writes too much about his inner thoughts, which makes it boring to read.

When can we take control of the army? If you don't master the force, I'm afraid you won't even be able to sleep well.

No, the writing is too verbose, let's say Shao Song